Dribbles And Drabbles
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
I would be very worried about this hungry monster. I'm pretty sure I wouldn't go anywhere this Lake Eustis. I expected this to be a contest entry, but I don't see that it is. Thank you for sharing it with us and I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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I would be very worried about this hungry monster. I'm pretty sure I wouldn't go anywhere this Lake Eustis. I expected this to be a contest entry, but I don't see that it is. Thank you for sharing it with us and I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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No contest entry. Appreciate the review.
Comment from Fleedleflump
Mmmmm - extra-crispy human burnt ends! I hope the feeding frenzy monster has a lovely seasoned meal. You made me smile with your ultra-flash piece. Nicely written.
Mike
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Mmmmm - extra-crispy human burnt ends! I hope the feeding frenzy monster has a lovely seasoned meal. You made me smile with your ultra-flash piece. Nicely written.
Mike
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here Brett with your clever flash fiction and the horror speaks for itself here in the ashes served up as food, a chilling write, love Dolly x
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You made me smile here Brett with your clever flash fiction and the horror speaks for itself here in the ashes served up as food, a chilling write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Appreciate the review.
Comment from royowen
I like this post. It's funny how we choose to find a burial place for our dear one's remains, guided by our perception of them, I hope God approves of our thinking, I know He chose prophet's bones to be transplanted in holy ground, in the OT, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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I like this post. It's funny how we choose to find a burial place for our dear one's remains, guided by our perception of them, I hope God approves of our thinking, I know He chose prophet's bones to be transplanted in holy ground, in the OT, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Appreciate the review.
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Most welcome
Comment from Teri7
This is a very interesting and well written 50 word flash fiction story telling why frenzy monsters have to eat. I love the art work you chose to go with your words. Thanks for sharing! Teri
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This is a very interesting and well written 50 word flash fiction story telling why frenzy monsters have to eat. I love the art work you chose to go with your words. Thanks for sharing! Teri
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Comment Written 27-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2022
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Appreciate the review.
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you are so welcome!