Random Rhyme and Petty Prose
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Unjestered"a collection of phenomenally mundane work.
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Comment from lyenochka
Well, if the clown makeup starts running, it could be pretty frightful. Great use of alliteration in every line and lots of clown synonyms from the title (jester) and clown and harlequin. I guess a picture would be too scary...
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Well, if the clown makeup starts running, it could be pretty frightful. Great use of alliteration in every line and lots of clown synonyms from the title (jester) and clown and harlequin. I guess a picture would be too scary...
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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That's what I thought. Thanks for giving this a look.
