Love Empowers
Two who become one are blessed24 total reviews
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
What a great story! I was with you every step of the way. You illustrate love in a very real and relatable way. You have such great memories of what sounds like an amazing husband! Good job!
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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What a great story! I was with you every step of the way. You illustrate love in a very real and relatable way. You have such great memories of what sounds like an amazing husband! Good job!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Thanks so much for a wonderful review. Life is an adventure -- mine has been such fun.
Comment from BethShelby
This is a great story. A lot of it reminded me of my own life. I married a wonderful older man too. We actually had 61 years together. I remember a time with us driving from New Orleans where he had been on a job search, with on a gas credit card and 10 cents in real money. You could get coffee for a nickel back then, so we spent our dime. For lunch, we went to super market opening and got a free hot dog and a coke. LOL Life was an adventure.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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This is a great story. A lot of it reminded me of my own life. I married a wonderful older man too. We actually had 61 years together. I remember a time with us driving from New Orleans where he had been on a job search, with on a gas credit card and 10 cents in real money. You could get coffee for a nickel back then, so we spent our dime. For lunch, we went to super market opening and got a free hot dog and a coke. LOL Life was an adventure.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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Life is a wonderful adventure! Thanks for sharing with me and for reading my post.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
At the end in this writing, the essay on a question whether love is a disease or a cure has been generalized, stating that love is not a disease but it empowers when love in the lovers or couples, at the instance of two who become one are blessed; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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At the end in this writing, the essay on a question whether love is a disease or a cure has been generalized, stating that love is not a disease but it empowers when love in the lovers or couples, at the instance of two who become one are blessed; well said, well done, post god speed more, share post not 4 self-joy-pride but 4 God and readers worldwide Alcreator Litt Dear (DR)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2022
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thanks for your most kind review.
Comment from Wendy G
What a story! Young and naive and wanting some fun. You were fortunate to have the help of the policeman. Thanks for sharing your story. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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What a story! Young and naive and wanting some fun. You were fortunate to have the help of the policeman. Thanks for sharing your story. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks for a great review..
Comment from jessizero
I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. It kept my attention from the very first word to the very last. I am glad he wasn't mad at you for losing the money. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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I thoroughly enjoyed reading your story. It kept my attention from the very first word to the very last. I am glad he wasn't mad at you for losing the money. Thank you for sharing this here, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks for a great review.
Comment from LJbutterfly
This is a beautiful and realistic story. I enjoyed your descriptions and details. You made it easy to envision each scene. As I read, I hoped you would not give in to the tricks of the carnival barker, but in the end, love won out and Ronnie was not angry. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.
Notes: At the end of the 3rd paragraph, after the final word "evening.'s," delete the apostrophe and the S.
Carnaval hucksters and Carnaval barker --The spelling is "carnival"
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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This is a beautiful and realistic story. I enjoyed your descriptions and details. You made it easy to envision each scene. As I read, I hoped you would not give in to the tricks of the carnival barker, but in the end, love won out and Ronnie was not angry. Great story. Best wishes in the contest.
Notes: At the end of the 3rd paragraph, after the final word "evening.'s," delete the apostrophe and the S.
Carnaval hucksters and Carnaval barker --The spelling is "carnival"
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Corrections will be made. Thanks.
Comment from Wayne Fowler
Nice story. Well told.
took the role of almost chaperone for Merilyn - This phrase is unclear. You might want to reword it.
I loved hearing the Carnaval hucksters shout out in their sing-song way: A period would work better.
and only managed to get three dime - dime(s)
Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Nice story. Well told.
took the role of almost chaperone for Merilyn - This phrase is unclear. You might want to reword it.
I loved hearing the Carnaval hucksters shout out in their sing-song way: A period would work better.
and only managed to get three dime - dime(s)
Best wishes.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Corrections will be immediately made. Thanks.
Comment from royowen
Thsts the important, true love will forgive, even if the world thinks it's unforgivable, such a little thing, the important thing was you didn't feel you should excuse it. I love this biographical accounting of your life, or at lest part of it, I enjoyed it, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo .: I don't want to do any of (the) rides. 2: get three dime(s) to stay
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thsts the important, true love will forgive, even if the world thinks it's unforgivable, such a little thing, the important thing was you didn't feel you should excuse it. I love this biographical accounting of your life, or at lest part of it, I enjoyed it, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Typo .: I don't want to do any of (the) rides. 2: get three dime(s) to stay
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks for your kind review. corrections will be made immediately.
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Bless you
Comment from dmt1967
This is a great story and very well written. The lesson here is carnival people are usually con men lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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This is a great story and very well written. The lesson here is carnival people are usually con men lol. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Have a great weekend.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks for a very kind review.
Comment from Anne Johnston
Great story and very well written. sounds like you married a very understanding and compassionate man and I think yo show that love is something special when you find the right one.
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Great story and very well written. sounds like you married a very understanding and compassionate man and I think yo show that love is something special when you find the right one.
Comment Written 25-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2022
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Thanks for a kind review.
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You are welcome
