My Son
My youngest son worshiped his older brother.15 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thank you for sharing this. You are a hero in my eyes as you raised your children and grands! I can imagine how hard this was to write.
Loved reading about how much your younger son admired your older son. And your older son kept modeling that good behavior to follow.
Best wishes in the contest!
One comment about the last line. I always thought it was "towed" but it's "toed." https://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/towed+the+line
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you for sharing this. You are a hero in my eyes as you raised your children and grands! I can imagine how hard this was to write.
Loved reading about how much your younger son admired your older son. And your older son kept modeling that good behavior to follow.
Best wishes in the contest!
One comment about the last line. I always thought it was "towed" but it's "toed." https://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/towed+the+line
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. My oldest really was a helpful influence on his younger brother and he worshiped him. Thank you again for your help. They did catch the one who did it and the trial was one of the most difficult things I have ever gone through. I raised his kids, Oldest was 4. The youngest 2 weeks.
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Bless you for all you do!! 💖💖
Comment from Faith Williams
I can feel the pride you feel for your older son coming through. I can also feel his sense of responsibility. It's a lovely piece all around. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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I can feel the pride you feel for your older son coming through. I can also feel his sense of responsibility. It's a lovely piece all around. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. My oldest really was a helpful influence on his younger brother and he worshiped him. Thank you again.
Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig
OMG! My heart goes out to you for the death of your youngest child. I know well how that feels because I too lost my only child in an accident. I don't know you, but I extend a hug from the distance. I love this poem about your oldest son. It is well-written, and I can feel your love for him. Blessings, I wish for both of you.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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OMG! My heart goes out to you for the death of your youngest child. I know well how that feels because I too lost my only child in an accident. I don't know you, but I extend a hug from the distance. I love this poem about your oldest son. It is well-written, and I can feel your love for him. Blessings, I wish for both of you.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. My oldest really was a helpful influence on his younger brother and he worshiped him. Thank you again.
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You are most welcome Mrs. Annie! Blessings to you and your son.
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
My heart dropped when I read your author's notes. I am so sorry. I know this was hard for you to write. May he rest in peace. I did not expect the ending. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt story.
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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My heart dropped when I read your author's notes. I am so sorry. I know this was hard for you to write. May he rest in peace. I did not expect the ending. Thank you for sharing your heartfelt story.
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Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. My oldest really was a helpful influence on his younger brother and he worshiped him. Thank you again.
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You are welcome.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry I a great tribute to both sons, Annie.
I enjoyed reading it, though it was poignant after
reading your notes. Great job with the smooth flow,
the rhymes, and the heartfelt message.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
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reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Your contest entry I a great tribute to both sons, Annie.
I enjoyed reading it, though it was poignant after
reading your notes. Great job with the smooth flow,
the rhymes, and the heartfelt message.
Best wishes in the contest, Jan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2022
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. My oldest really was a helpful influence on his younger brother and he worshiped him. Thank you again.
