One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The pictures are beautiful. I like the way you describe the patch quilt hill.
Looking from an airplane, the land below looks like patches of quilts pieced together. It is an amazing thing to see. It would be great to ride down the road and see the beauty in this picture. Thank you for the post.
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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The pictures are beautiful. I like the way you describe the patch quilt hill.
Looking from an airplane, the land below looks like patches of quilts pieced together. It is an amazing thing to see. It would be great to ride down the road and see the beauty in this picture. Thank you for the post.
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you :) I appreciate your lovely review. May you have a wonderful weekend. ♡
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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You as well. You are welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Cool! I love your picture in the illustration and in your words. I didn't know what a tailorbird was but I loved all the sewing imagery. Hills do look quilted so that really worked for me.
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Cool! I love your picture in the illustration and in your words. I didn't know what a tailorbird was but I loved all the sewing imagery. Hills do look quilted so that really worked for me.
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Yes, Tailorbirds are real. They are so cute. :) I like their name. It fit in my haiku nicely.
Thank you very much! Have a great long weekend! Hugs♡
Comment from Gert sherwood
Gypsy
I like how you have the picture of the field before it bears wheat
And the glorious beauty of the wheat flowing with the wind as the sun reflection on the golden hay.
Gert
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Gypsy
I like how you have the picture of the field before it bears wheat
And the glorious beauty of the wheat flowing with the wind as the sun reflection on the golden hay.
Gert
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much! Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from AP Apgar
I like your poem - Good picture presentation in both pictures - looking at the picture sewing the wheat together into a quilt - the birds are the tailors stitching it together. Clever. Good Job. Flow needs to bake a little longer?
Suggest Sewn tight into patch quilt hills? hug
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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I like your poem - Good picture presentation in both pictures - looking at the picture sewing the wheat together into a quilt - the birds are the tailors stitching it together. Clever. Good Job. Flow needs to bake a little longer?
Suggest Sewn tight into patch quilt hills? hug
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much! Have a great long weekend! Hugs♡
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are relaxing, lovely, interesting, clear and
creative. I actually looked up Tailorbirds! An interesting bird
for sure. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
lovely and compliments this poem. Have a great weekend!
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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The author's words are relaxing, lovely, interesting, clear and
creative. I actually looked up Tailorbirds! An interesting bird
for sure. The poem flows and connects well. The artwork is
lovely and compliments this poem. Have a great weekend!
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much! Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from mermaids
The description of the birds as "tailorbirds thread through" is creative and gives a bright image of the scene in your words. Your haiku form paints a picture here, a pretty one too.
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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The description of the birds as "tailorbirds thread through" is creative and gives a bright image of the scene in your words. Your haiku form paints a picture here, a pretty one too.
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much! Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from karenina
How perfect! "tailorbirds thread through." Of course, it would be the tailorbirds! I'm constantly impressed with your ability to seamlessly weave a story in these brief yet elegant forms.
Such a delight to read and with such an image!
Karenina
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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How perfect! "tailorbirds thread through." Of course, it would be the tailorbirds! I'm constantly impressed with your ability to seamlessly weave a story in these brief yet elegant forms.
Such a delight to read and with such an image!
Karenina
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much! Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
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Your synapses fire on all cylinders!
You amaze me!
Comment from royowen
Yes, I can see where these great hills can look not only like quits, but sometimes like patchwork quilts, a great job Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : Sewn tight over quilts on hills, (there's a propensity to sacrifice definite and articles for syllables, it's poor grammar)
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Yes, I can see where these great hills can look not only like quits, but sometimes like patchwork quilts, a great job Gypsy, well done, blessings Roy
Suggestion : Sewn tight over quilts on hills, (there's a propensity to sacrifice definite and articles for syllables, it's poor grammar)
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Roy. I corrected it. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
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Well done
Comment from JoannaN
This is, indeed, a picture painted with words. You described the scenery in a chronological order - firstly we look at the fields, moving our glance to the hills, to look up in the end. Therefore, you mimicked the actions of a true human being who is looking at your picture. A good job :)
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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This is, indeed, a picture painted with words. You described the scenery in a chronological order - firstly we look at the fields, moving our glance to the hills, to look up in the end. Therefore, you mimicked the actions of a true human being who is looking at your picture. A good job :)
Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus
Comment from Donna G. (aka Sam Duck)
I think you have achieved your aim of painting with words on this Haiku, Gypsy! This is lovely imagery, and your photo art just complement your poem so beautifully! Very nice!
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reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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I think you have achieved your aim of painting with words on this Haiku, Gypsy! This is lovely imagery, and your photo art just complement your poem so beautifully! Very nice!
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Comment Written 27-May-2022
reply by the author on 27-May-2022
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Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind review and helpful feedback. May you have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." Atticus