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Comment from lyenochka
Loved this! Yes, we are passing through time's "river rapids" and we get into the "ocean" where our souls will ascend into Heaven. So we don't have to fret about the speed of life.
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Loved this! Yes, we are passing through time's "river rapids" and we get into the "ocean" where our souls will ascend into Heaven. So we don't have to fret about the speed of life.
Comment Written 25-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you very much, Helen. I'm happy you like it. I agree with you.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from jessizero
This poem expressed something true. Life rushes by like rapids in a river. The older I become, the faster time passes. Thank you for sharing your poem. Best wishes.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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This poem expressed something true. Life rushes by like rapids in a river. The older I become, the faster time passes. Thank you for sharing your poem. Best wishes.
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Comment Written 25-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus
Comment from royowen
Such a great observation Gypsy, oh yes indeed, the raindrops are caused by evaporated moisture, possibly from the ocean in the first, they are steam dried in the clouds, and the cycle starts over again, well done, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Such a great observation Gypsy, oh yes indeed, the raindrops are caused by evaporated moisture, possibly from the ocean in the first, they are steam dried in the clouds, and the cycle starts over again, well done, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 25-May-2022
reply by the author on 25-May-2022
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Thank you very much, my friend. I appreciate that you took the time to read and review my poem.
Gypsy Blue Rose
"The poet waits quietly to paint the unsaid." - Atticus