Comment from evesayshi

Excellent

In my opinion, a fun write with just a couple of uneven rhyming spots, bearing in mind children's delight in sing song rhyme - compliant with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest...

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

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reply by the author on 23-May-2022

Thanks so much....you are right...this could use a little trimming up....
Best Wishes to you and yours....Stu Harrell

reply by evesayshi on 23-May-2022

You are very welcome Stuart - warmly reminiscent of the beloved Dr. Seuss...Eve

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute poem you have penned . You used very cute words that made me giggle as I read it. It sounded like a good time when folks were enjoying life and dancing to the fun songs. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

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reply by the author on 23-May-2022

Thanks so much.....these are fun to put together....mostly to get kids just to make silly stuff up.....
Best to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from Bridge

Exceptional

Brilliant work. Very well written. I loved the rhyming and how well it flows and the story it tells. All the best to you in the contest.
With regards

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

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reply by the author on 23-May-2022

Thanks so much.....Very fun to fiddle with these.....Best to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from Fleedleflump

Excellent

This was great fun to read - something between a tongue twister and a wordy version of those nutty animations Terry Gilliam used to produce for Monty Python. I very much enjoyed :-)

Mike

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

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reply by the author on 23-May-2022

Yo Brother.....Thanks so very much...I grew up with these little "sillies"and they are fun to stitch together.....

Best wishes to you and yours......Stu Harrell

Comment from Sandra Nelms-Ludwig

Excellent

It's a great poem. It for sure fits the children poem prompt. Kids would enjoy saying or reading the repeated "Who put the Wacky Doodle in the Wacky Doo" in various ways throughout the poem. I think most would find it funny. Clever ending too. Great job and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 23-May-2022

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reply by the author on 23-May-2022

Thanks so very much....we could all use a little Silly Willy these days

Best Wishes to you and yours.....Stu Harrell

reply by Sandra Nelms-Ludwig on 23-May-2022

You are most welcome. Please consider reading some of my poems on my profile.

Comment from Whitewave

Excellent

Stuart,
Crazy but clever and fun. Just what we need in today's crazy, Wacky Doo kind of world. Too many Silly Billys and lots of hoity toity folk, so no wonder we're all round the bend wondering when the Wacky Doo will end.
Thanks for the giggle.

Just wondering if this is a typo? "So tickle up your noddle" /noodle?

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Thanks so much.....Yikes you are exactly right.....we need a little silly these days....and it should be noodle...

Godspeed to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from Beri Bee

Excellent

This is one of my favorite types of poetry... whimsical, silly, clever, jolly! Thank you for the Wacky Doo! I'm book-casing it to read again when I need a smile. It's just right for this inner child! Thanks!

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Thanks so much....I grew up with these little sillies...

Godspeed to you and yours.....Stu Harrell

Comment from Pam Lonsdale

Excellent

I liked the line "throwed it all together" - just sounds like something a child would say. This is a fun entry for the children's contest - good luck to you!

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Thanks so very much....these are fun to stitch together...the idea is to make kids fiddle with words and just "wiggle" something together...

Best to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from LJbutterfly

Excellent

Hahaha! This is hilarious and "Wacky Doo." As a retired early childhood teacher, I could almost hear children accusing one another of being, "Wacky Doodle." After reading the poem, I would have given children art supplies and told them to create a Wacky Doodle on paper. Great poem. Best wishes in the contest.

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Thanks very much......these are always fun to fiddle with..

Best Wishes to you and yours....Stu Harrell

Comment from karenina

Excellent

What fun! Reminiscent of those tongue twisters we used to stumble over as kids.... "She sells seashells at the seashore...." I'm a big kid myself and love children's poetry. I will read this to my youngest grandson...but that's just an excuse to enjoy it one more time myself!

Karenina

 Comment Written 22-May-2022

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reply by the author on 22-May-2022

Thanks so very much...I grew up with these silly verses....lots of fun..

Best Wishes to you and yours....Stu Harrell

reply by karenina on 23-May-2022

We need more fun in this world!