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Comment from Wendy G
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That is so beautiful!! Each season and each part of nature will remind your children of you and your love, and you will be in their hearts forever. We all want that. A stunning presentation also.
Well written indeed.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

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Comment from Charity Stewart
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The image that you chosen with the color scheme is wonderful. I was scrolling through perms to comment on and yours capture my attention. Well written ð???

 Comment Written 11-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

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Comment from Whitewave
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Gypsy,
Lovely thoughts and images expressed here. Different aspects of nature will be a constant reminder of the time you spend with your children in this life, and more than that, remind them we are part of nature that lives on forever, especially in their hearts.

 Comment Written 11-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank you very much for the exceptional review and kind words. I appreciate your feedback.

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Comment from karenina
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I never thought I'd find such beauty in poems reflecting on death...

But here you are, whispering of awe and reverence not of loss, but of the eternal memories we gift to those we leave behind!

Karenina

 Comment Written 11-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. I appreciate your excellent review.

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reply by karenina on 11-May-2022
    Such a delicate way with words you have!
Comment from Gloria ....
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Such beautiful poetry, and to think we instill in our offspring our memory in the ocean, the sky, the trees, and all things nature brings.

A stunning work of art, and many thanks for sharing.

Gloria

 Comment Written 10-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank you, sweetie pie. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

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Comment from lyenochka
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You give a peaceful feeling towards death. I remember that you loved the Mediterranean Sea and so your are drawn to the sea and sky. And yes, we will always be in our children's and grandchildren's hearts.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank very much, Helen. I'm happy you like it. I appreciate your excellent review.

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Comment from AP Apgar
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I like your creativity- I think I can understand you well enough- being fluent in so many different types of poetry- to want to speak poetry in one universal language inside a single poem as you have done here so well- launching your essence into eternity-
Leaving behind your poem map- so your children will know where to look for you- good job-

 Comment Written 10-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank very much, my friend. I'm happy you like it. I appreciate your excellent review.

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Comment from Janice Canerdy
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This is such an AWESOME poem--deeply moving and expressive, smoothing flowing, and powerful in its message about always being in our loved ones' hearts. Memorable imagery

 Comment Written 10-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Janice, thank you very much for your exceptional review and 6 stars! You are very kind.

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Comment from Regina Elliott
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How peacefully comforting.
How frustrating I ran out of
six stars yesterday. This is
a dreamy and gorgeous poem. I hope you have a
harmonious spring & summer. Blessings. ~

 Comment Written 10-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    Thank you, Regina. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

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Comment from jessizero
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This is a great Jisei poem, but I hope you won't die for quite some time. Your poem was beautiful. You will be in all nature and in the hearts of your loved ones. Thank you for sharing this.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022


reply by the author on 11-May-2022
    I plan to live a long time :)

    Thank you, my friend. I appreciate your kind review and feedback.

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