Here's The Scoop
one line poem11 total reviews
Comment from LisaMay
That certainly is good news! I wish the simplicity of sharing love that produces happiness such as this could be in everyone's day.
Your poem introduces something to think about - wondering who 'all' might refer to - other family members? If the poem is just about him and you it would probably read: That makes us both live happily
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reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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That certainly is good news! I wish the simplicity of sharing love that produces happiness such as this could be in everyone's day.
Your poem introduces something to think about - wondering who 'all' might refer to - other family members? If the poem is just about him and you it would probably read: That makes us both live happily
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Comment Written 01-May-2022
reply by the author on 01-May-2022
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All... friends, family, aquaintances, onlookers that gossip. I have to find a boyfriend to marry me and be simply content like this story with me. Daydreaming brings reality. Thank you :)
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I am a daydreamer too. Love is elusive.