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Comment from Cindy Decker 2
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Gypsy,
This is a haunting haiku, and a very effective one. Some people in my family hunt, but I do not like it and I do not think it should be called a sport. This poem is so eerie--it really calls attention to the plight of the deer.
Excellent work, Gypsy.
Best wishes and blessings,
Cindy

 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much, Cindy :) . I appreciate your lovely review.

    Gypsy hugs
Comment from royowen
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What a great piece of artwork, which gives that sense of abeyance of the one to the other. The deer gives its life to nourish another, hopefully that's the case, or it's killing for no reason, well done, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, Roy. Blessings.

    Gypsy hugs
reply by royowen on 11-Apr-2022
    Most welcome
Comment from Debi Pick Marquette
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Absolutely stunning art, as the colors follow into your beautiful poem! I actually felt the rush of the hunter as they track and find their prey. You have such a beautiful soul and it shows with every word you give to your amazing poetry!

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 Comment Written 11-Apr-2022


reply by the author on 11-Apr-2022
    Thank you very much for the excellent review and kind words, Debi. Blessings.

    Gypsy hugs