One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Bill Schott
This jiyu shi suite, Murder of Crows Caw, has the proper formatting and finds the crows doing the backup work after the farmers have gleaned what they could. Nice.
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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This jiyu shi suite, Murder of Crows Caw, has the proper formatting and finds the crows doing the backup work after the farmers have gleaned what they could. Nice.
Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy hugs :)
Comment from Debra White
Hello Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your Jiyu-Shi poem.
Great imagery and lovely use of alliteration. I can understand why the farmer was worrying and sweating about those crows. Their intentions were not good in the slightest - A 'murder' of crows is such an appropriate group name!
Best wishes as always, Debra
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Hello Gypsy :)
I really enjoyed reading your Jiyu-Shi poem.
Great imagery and lovely use of alliteration. I can understand why the farmer was worrying and sweating about those crows. Their intentions were not good in the slightest - A 'murder' of crows is such an appropriate group name!
Best wishes as always, Debra
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
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Thank you very much for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy hugs :)
Comment from lyenochka
Great poem, Gypsy! I liked how you painted the picture of the hardworking farmer and the word play of "ripe" as referring to the sweaty smell of the farmer and the ripeness of the grain. Crows know where to get their food!
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Great poem, Gypsy! I liked how you painted the picture of the hardworking farmer and the word play of "ripe" as referring to the sweaty smell of the farmer and the ripeness of the grain. Crows know where to get their food!
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2022
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Again, you find a double meaning I missed lol
I appreciate your kind feedback very much; Also, for taking the time to read and review my poem. Gypsy hugs :)