April Fool
Contest Fiction 9 Sentence27 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Your plea for peace is felt by all as the world is suffering from turmoil and lives are lost. There is much injustice in the world today and I wonder will it ever change. Is God himself playing tricks on us and we are just the fools? I wonder, love Dolly x
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Your plea for peace is felt by all as the world is suffering from turmoil and lives are lost. There is much injustice in the world today and I wonder will it ever change. Is God himself playing tricks on us and we are just the fools? I wonder, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-Apr-2022
Comment from tfawcus
The omniscient God that towers above the pale images imagined by man to justify their warring religions may indeed bring us a war free world at a time and in the manner of his choosing.
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The omniscient God that towers above the pale images imagined by man to justify their warring religions may indeed bring us a war free world at a time and in the manner of his choosing.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
Comment from Bill Schott
This is the challenge prompt:
Write about an April Fools prank that goes terribly wrong.
Your acrostic poem of ARIL FOOL does not even approach that end.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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This is the challenge prompt:
Write about an April Fools prank that goes terribly wrong.
Your acrostic poem of ARIL FOOL does not even approach that end.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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T.y.
Comment from Shirley McLain
You did a fine job on this form of writing. I can't say I care for it, but I don't have to. I Understood the requirements and I believe you met them. Have a great evening. Shirley
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You did a fine job on this form of writing. I can't say I care for it, but I don't have to. I Understood the requirements and I believe you met them. Have a great evening. Shirley
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
Comment from Tpa
Reading this poem, I hope some day God brings us to a war-free world and there will be no violence on television and God will take care of everyone, even the fools. At least, this was my interpretation of your work of art and this, my fellow writer, was NO April Fool.
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Reading this poem, I hope some day God brings us to a war-free world and there will be no violence on television and God will take care of everyone, even the fools. At least, this was my interpretation of your work of art and this, my fellow writer, was NO April Fool.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
Comment from Annette R.
It is nine sentences. Not sure about acrostic. I like the lines that include war-free world because I believe we can make it so. I'm not sure I see humor. Anyone can be a fool on any day and belief is for the believers. Note: I too do believe in God.
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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It is nine sentences. Not sure about acrostic. I like the lines that include war-free world because I believe we can make it so. I'm not sure I see humor. Anyone can be a fool on any day and belief is for the believers. Note: I too do believe in God.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
reply by the author on 03-Apr-2022
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T.y.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
I like to read a story when the words are highlighted because they have a tendency to be lost in the shuffle of other words if not highlighted. Good luck in the contest.
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I like to read a story when the words are highlighted because they have a tendency to be lost in the shuffle of other words if not highlighted. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
Comment from the13thpoet
Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take on the April F***S is definitely an interesting one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
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Hello fellow writer a good day to you. I hope this review finds you well. As a poet/writer it is always interesting to see the different takes on these contest/writing prompts. I think your take on the April F***S is definitely an interesting one. Hopefully so will others, good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Apr-2022
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I enjoyed reading this well-written poem. The artwork sets the tone immediately and pulled me in. The colored text is effective and creative. You did a great job with the prompt.
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I enjoyed reading this well-written poem. The artwork sets the tone immediately and pulled me in. The colored text is effective and creative. You did a great job with the prompt.
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I don't think anyone can fool God, he sees beyond the everything. April Fools day can be the worst day of many peoples lives and God knows this. It would be so nice to have a war free world. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra
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I don't think anyone can fool God, he sees beyond the everything. April Fools day can be the worst day of many peoples lives and God knows this. It would be so nice to have a war free world. Well done, and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra
Comment Written 01-Apr-2022