Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Are you at Prairie Breeze? Are you planning in traveling on after that? Your life sounds so exciting, and it sounds as if you're really enojing yourself. Have you sold your home to do this? I wish we could have done that, we're too old now. But I did enjoy coming along with you. Lovely trip, my friend. Warm hugs, Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thank you Sandra for reviewing and your amazing comments. To answer your questions- Jim sold the house in 2013 and because of his commitment to his job we actually headed out the end of October, with 2 cats and a 74 lb dog, lol. Now we just have the cat. Yes, we are in Prairie Breeze and we will be here until early October.

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I am so impressed with your travelling and you should be able to write a great book for tourists when you have finished with all your recommendations, I have great admiration for you constantly moving about and enjoying life in different towns, a fine write, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thank you so much my friend for reviewing and your amazing comments.

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Nice story.
degrease - did you mean digress?
commas after the first Oregon and North Dakota just as you did the second Oregon.
Fenley, Nevada at - comma after Nevada
enjoying the scenery. After such - no period, just add the fragment to the previous sentence
driers - dryers
Best wishes.

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 Comment Written 01-Apr-2022

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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2022

Thank you so much Wayne for reviewing and your fantastic suggestion, which I will correct shortly.