Father
Explaining about my ...15 total reviews
Comment from in777wr#
These sentences are well crafted. God is all of those things you mentioned, and more. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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These sentences are well crafted. God is all of those things you mentioned, and more. The picture you chose definitely compliments this poem well. Nice job.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much for your super review. I greatly appreciate it.
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You're welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Author,
It looks like you managed to meet the directions of this very-intricate contest. *smile* AND share some wonderful information about our God and King. I enjoyed this and wish you luck!
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Dear Mystery Author,
It looks like you managed to meet the directions of this very-intricate contest. *smile* AND share some wonderful information about our God and King. I enjoyed this and wish you luck!
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you very much Robyn. I took the opportunity to share God?s real character which of course some people take to be fiction. (Smile)
Thanks for your good wishes.
Comment from jessizero
I like your poem. It has a ring of truth in only 78 words. Thank you so much for writing this and choosing to share it here. Keep up the good work, and best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I like your poem. It has a ring of truth in only 78 words. Thank you so much for writing this and choosing to share it here. Keep up the good work, and best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much for your thoughtful review and encouragement, and good wishes.
Comment from Leann DS
This was really very good. You did an excellent job running out the requirements, although admittedly, I didn't count your words... But all the rest of the requirements were met and your essay flowed nicely, was unforced, and made sense. Sure winner in the contest!
Have a great day. Hugs and blessings to you.
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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This was really very good. You did an excellent job running out the requirements, although admittedly, I didn't count your words... But all the rest of the requirements were met and your essay flowed nicely, was unforced, and made sense. Sure winner in the contest!
Have a great day. Hugs and blessings to you.
Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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Thank you Leann! That's so encouraging. (My computer counter said 78 and so did the FS counter, so all good.) I am glad it made sense, the rules were quite quirky! I appreciate your kind review.
Comment from oliver818
I have to say I'm not religious so I won't comment on the content but your message here is very clear. The picture is very nice and I like the combination of the words omniscient, omnipresent and omnipotent.
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reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I have to say I'm not religious so I won't comment on the content but your message here is very clear. The picture is very nice and I like the combination of the words omniscient, omnipresent and omnipotent.
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Comment Written 30-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 30-Mar-2022
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I appreciate the fact that you are reviewing, and I am glad you find it clear. I accept and respect your thoughts. Thank you very much.