The Writings of a Mouse
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Greatest Love"Pieces of my Heart
17 total reviews
Comment from shelley kaye
aw you must have a very special relationship together! treasure that - not everyone is that luck! wonderful happy poem for the contest!
thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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aw you must have a very special relationship together! treasure that - not everyone is that luck! wonderful happy poem for the contest!
thank you for sharing and good luck!
shelley :)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much! Yes indeed we do. She?s the best!
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
A mother and father's love is wonderful. If a child knows they are loved and cared for they will be content and happy. Kisses and hugs are always welcomed.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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A mother and father's love is wonderful. If a child knows they are loved and cared for they will be content and happy. Kisses and hugs are always welcomed.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so much! My mom makes me smile! She?s always been my best friend.
Comment from Pam Lonsdale
What a sweet poem and tribute to your mother. My daughter often tells me that I'm her best friend, and it always makes me happy.
Very nice job with the writing prompt.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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What a sweet poem and tribute to your mother. My daughter often tells me that I'm her best friend, and it always makes me happy.
Very nice job with the writing prompt.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much! So is my mom!
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
I love this poem, you did a nice job with the prompt. I received the feeling of love from your writing. Creating a strong feeling for your readers is an essential part of writing poetry. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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I love this poem, you did a nice job with the prompt. I received the feeling of love from your writing. Creating a strong feeling for your readers is an essential part of writing poetry. Well done.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much I?m glad you felt the love shine through. My mom makes me smile.
Comment from Regina Elliott
A very touching heartfelt
poem. If this is for a contest
it's a good contender for it.
I hope you have a splendid and creative weekend. All the best to you and yours.
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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A very touching heartfelt
poem. If this is for a contest
it's a good contender for it.
I hope you have a splendid and creative weekend. All the best to you and yours.
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thank you so very much! I hope you have a great weekend as well!
Comment from JPGeo
If we're honest, really honest, our mothers drive us nutty. But ok, let's say yours really makes you happy. She must live many miles away or heaven forbid is no longer among the living in which case you get poetic license here. The only thing I would change in your poem is "you gave therapy to me".
Cheers,
John
(please don't be offended its very early in the morning here:)
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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If we're honest, really honest, our mothers drive us nutty. But ok, let's say yours really makes you happy. She must live many miles away or heaven forbid is no longer among the living in which case you get poetic license here. The only thing I would change in your poem is "you gave therapy to me".
Cheers,
John
(please don't be offended its very early in the morning here:)
Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Lol. Mines my best friend. Thanks for the review.
Comment from Tom Horonzy
R.A. you might want to edit and add a few lines as the rules read as follows: Write a free verse poem... free verse only. no metered lines. no rhyme schemes. minimum 15 lines.
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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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R.A. you might want to edit and add a few lines as the rules read as follows: Write a free verse poem... free verse only. no metered lines. no rhyme schemes. minimum 15 lines.
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Comment Written 26-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2022
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Thanks Tom! I thought I had adhered but I see I missed it.
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ok
