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Adventures around & upon a hill

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Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
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This is interesting but I'm confused. She seems to think she is a monk and has to follow all the rules. I must have missed the last chapter and will go look for it. You do give a good view of what must have been a life lived in physical suffering.

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 Comment Written 17-Mar-2022


reply by the author on 17-Mar-2022
    Thank you for your review. Yuh, just go back into my portfolio and ch. 19 & it will make things clearer. There's no need to write a review. Just get caught up.