Why is it so?
A Philosophical poem. Beautifully67 total reviews
Comment from Barry Penfold
Roy, a well thought out poem and compelling messages and nice rhyming.
Well done once again and hope you and your family are fine.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Roy, a well thought out poem and compelling messages and nice rhyming.
Well done once again and hope you and your family are fine.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks Barry, for these excellent comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from Ricky1024
"Why is it so?"
This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
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And, Unfortunately in the world there's too many judgments by too many wrong people. The power is in the wrong hands, along with the wealth.
Yes, while the remainders live in pain, filth, misery, and
Ill health!
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Right now in a small eastern part of the world the whole entire Earth is wondering what the outcome will be between Mother Russia and Ukraine and what the ultimate results will be when it comes to the dictator named Valdimar Putin?
Doctor Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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"Why is it so?"
This was well written Rich in Theme and Imagery.
It also, read well and flowed well with no Grammar Issues.
...
And, Unfortunately in the world there's too many judgments by too many wrong people. The power is in the wrong hands, along with the wealth.
Yes, while the remainders live in pain, filth, misery, and
Ill health!
...
Right now in a small eastern part of the world the whole entire Earth is wondering what the outcome will be between Mother Russia and Ukraine and what the ultimate results will be when it comes to the dictator named Valdimar Putin?
Doctor Ricky 1024
Comment Written 14-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Ricky, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from JEB
Roy,
I am unsure of how long you have been writing, but beauty and truth dance together through your musings. The harsh truth is ugly, but your delicate weaving leaves me with a sense of hope despite the sins of the past. I love the use of questions to draw contemplation. Only suggestion..."verbal stools" sounds poetic, but I am unsure of what you are trying to say. Overall, very well done.
Thanks for sharing,
Jen
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Roy,
I am unsure of how long you have been writing, but beauty and truth dance together through your musings. The harsh truth is ugly, but your delicate weaving leaves me with a sense of hope despite the sins of the past. I love the use of questions to draw contemplation. Only suggestion..."verbal stools" sounds poetic, but I am unsure of what you are trying to say. Overall, very well done.
Thanks for sharing,
Jen
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Jennifer, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Roy,
I am far from home as I write, but I want you to know that your poem moves me and resonates with me on many levels.
One of my absolute favorites of yours.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings,
Diane
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Hello Roy,
I am far from home as I write, but I want you to know that your poem moves me and resonates with me on many levels.
One of my absolute favorites of yours.
Thank you for sharing!
Blessings,
Diane
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Diane. for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from juliaSjames
Excellent poem, Roy. It's not easy to do the right thing. Jesus said no one was good but God. Paul complained that he kept doing wrong in spite of all his efforts. But as you say, the grace of God sets us free.
Thanks for sharing your inspired poetry and the wisdom of your author notes.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Excellent poem, Roy. It's not easy to do the right thing. Jesus said no one was good but God. Paul complained that he kept doing wrong in spite of all his efforts. But as you say, the grace of God sets us free.
Thanks for sharing your inspired poetry and the wisdom of your author notes.
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks Julia, for these wonderful comments and review, blessings Roy
Comment from in777wr#
This is a well written poem. The conclusion of this poem says it all. The message is one we all need to consider. We do need to stop judging things we don't understand. Your poem flows well, and I do like the consistent rhyming scheme. Great job.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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This is a well written poem. The conclusion of this poem says it all. The message is one we all need to consider. We do need to stop judging things we don't understand. Your poem flows well, and I do like the consistent rhyming scheme. Great job.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are welcome.
Comment from aryr
This was so beautiful Roy. I loved the picture of God's hand reaching out for another hand. Your words inspired the faith and trust in God's words. Only someone who believed in those words. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessings.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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This was so beautiful Roy. I loved the picture of God's hand reaching out for another hand. Your words inspired the faith and trust in God's words. Only someone who believed in those words. Very well done, greatly enjoyed. Blessings.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks Alie for these terrific comments and review, blessings Roy
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Most welcome, Roy. Blessings.
Comment from Dawn Munro
The times in which we live is a test of faith for sure! Who would think that such a war could happen in 2022? And the pandemic -- having lived through two years of it, with division amongst so many.
Yes, "loving ALL" -- not so easy to love our enemies, yet that is exactly what we must do -- pray for them. It's easy to love our family and friends...
As always, your rhyme and meter are spot-on, your poem evocative.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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The times in which we live is a test of faith for sure! Who would think that such a war could happen in 2022? And the pandemic -- having lived through two years of it, with division amongst so many.
Yes, "loving ALL" -- not so easy to love our enemies, yet that is exactly what we must do -- pray for them. It's easy to love our family and friends...
As always, your rhyme and meter are spot-on, your poem evocative.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much Dawn, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janetsue
This is a very informative writing and I appreciate your Author Notes as well. I do not know that much about Aboriginals but I do admire them--just like I do Native Americans. Life has been hard on them both. I also like that you provide associated scripture with your noteworthy postings. The artwork your chose, again, is beautiful. Smiles, Janet
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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This is a very informative writing and I appreciate your Author Notes as well. I do not know that much about Aboriginals but I do admire them--just like I do Native Americans. Life has been hard on them both. I also like that you provide associated scripture with your noteworthy postings. The artwork your chose, again, is beautiful. Smiles, Janet
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks Janet for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy
Comment from June Sargent
If we cannot love our neighbor whom we can see, how can we claim to love God whom we cannot see? 1 John 4:20. And yet many who claim to be God-fearing Christians will not lift a finger to help those of another race, breaking not man's law, but God's. So sad...
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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If we cannot love our neighbor whom we can see, how can we claim to love God whom we cannot see? 1 John 4:20. And yet many who claim to be God-fearing Christians will not lift a finger to help those of another race, breaking not man's law, but God's. So sad...
Comment Written 13-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2022
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Thanks June, for these wonderful comments and a super review, blessings Roy