Serenity
Peace and ...20 total reviews
Comment from Pearl Edwards
As I was reading your Serenity Acrostic poem, it was like a meditation for me. You have captured the tranquil moments from your visit to the lake within your words, Wendy. A truly beautiful read, I wish I had a six left for you. Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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As I was reading your Serenity Acrostic poem, it was like a meditation for me. You have captured the tranquil moments from your visit to the lake within your words, Wendy. A truly beautiful read, I wish I had a six left for you. Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi Valda, wow, your words are SO encouraging. Thank you for even thinking of a six. I appreciate your lovely review.
Wendy
Comment from juliaSjames
Lovely rhymed acrostic, dear Wendy.
Each line is serene in itself while still forming part of the whole - facets of a jewel.
The final line reminds me of the much loved hymn, "There is a balm in Gilead"
In my bedroom I keep a piece of artwork with the Chinese characters for serenity. Whenever my gaze falls on it I feel soothed and refreshed.
I visualize your poem framed and displayed in a suitable setting.
The illustration and presentation of your acrostic augment the effect of its words.
Best wishes for the contest, my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Lovely rhymed acrostic, dear Wendy.
Each line is serene in itself while still forming part of the whole - facets of a jewel.
The final line reminds me of the much loved hymn, "There is a balm in Gilead"
In my bedroom I keep a piece of artwork with the Chinese characters for serenity. Whenever my gaze falls on it I feel soothed and refreshed.
I visualize your poem framed and displayed in a suitable setting.
The illustration and presentation of your acrostic augment the effect of its words.
Best wishes for the contest, my friend
Stay safe and blessed
Julia
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Dear Julia, Thank you so much for your beautiful and encouraging words. The gift of six stars is greatly valued. I am honoured that my work has resonated so well with you. Sending blessings your way.
Wendy
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You're welcome!
Comment from Tom Horonzy
This is a nice piece. The only bump for me was "perfumes."
Essence of balm? Bouquet? idk. Perhaps "perfumes as?" Is perfume 'like' balm as re: to being similar or 'as' a function of balm? Best wishes.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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This is a nice piece. The only bump for me was "perfumes."
Essence of balm? Bouquet? idk. Perhaps "perfumes as?" Is perfume 'like' balm as re: to being similar or 'as' a function of balm? Best wishes.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you Tom for reviewing thoughtfully. I will consider your suggestion.
Wendy
Comment from lyenochka
I really like your rhyming acrostic poem! And I like how you used the near rhyme of 'water' with 'laughter." And you went beyond the peaceful feeling of serenity by adding active verbs like "renews, energies, and invites restoration." Best wishes in the contest!!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I really like your rhyming acrostic poem! And I like how you used the near rhyme of 'water' with 'laughter." And you went beyond the peaceful feeling of serenity by adding active verbs like "renews, energies, and invites restoration." Best wishes in the contest!!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Helen. Yes, you have understood what I wanted, that with serenity, we are not just observing passively, it's an active restoration process to energise us to fulfil our purpose.
Wendy
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That really came through! 💖
Comment from patcelaw
The photo fits perfectly with the words of your acrostic. I wish you the very best in the contest. Have a wonder filled weekend. May God bless you and yours.
Patricia
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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The photo fits perfectly with the words of your acrostic. I wish you the very best in the contest. Have a wonder filled weekend. May God bless you and yours.
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Patricia! Lovely review. Blessings your way as well.
Wendy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your skillfully written, expressive acrostic poem vividly and movingly describes nature's unique power to hold us spellbound, in awe of the peace and healing elements available to us. Good similes
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Your skillfully written, expressive acrostic poem vividly and movingly describes nature's unique power to hold us spellbound, in awe of the peace and healing elements available to us. Good similes
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you Janice for this lovely review. I value your comments.
Wendy
Comment from Theodore McDowell
Great poem and photograph, Wendy. It seems like you get a lot of your wisdom and contentment from nature. It is a common theme in your writing. Well done.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Great poem and photograph, Wendy. It seems like you get a lot of your wisdom and contentment from nature. It is a common theme in your writing. Well done.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Yes, that is true. Many thanks for reviewing. I appreciate it always.
Wendy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely photo, Wendy, and a nice presentation.
-Thanks for the notes, too.
-A well written acrostic with a good topic,
effective imagery, and rhyme.
-There is also a peaceful mood.
-Each line leads nicely to the next.
-A few images I like are "gentle healing,"
"refreshing peace," and the last line with
the very good comparison and soft sound
of the alliteration.
-A very nice entry; good luck!
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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-Lovely photo, Wendy, and a nice presentation.
-Thanks for the notes, too.
-A well written acrostic with a good topic,
effective imagery, and rhyme.
-There is also a peaceful mood.
-Each line leads nicely to the next.
-A few images I like are "gentle healing,"
"refreshing peace," and the last line with
the very good comparison and soft sound
of the alliteration.
-A very nice entry; good luck!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much Pam. Your thoughtful review and good wishes always mean a lot.
Wendy
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You are welcome, Wendy.
Comment from lancellot
Oh, yes. I can see this one in the winners circle. It has a perfect theme and word choice. I think there is something for everyone in every line who seeks peace and solace. It really will go over well with demographics of the voters.
Great idea.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Oh, yes. I can see this one in the winners circle. It has a perfect theme and word choice. I think there is something for everyone in every line who seeks peace and solace. It really will go over well with demographics of the voters.
Great idea.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you very much for this very encouraging and thoughtful review. I hope you are right!!
Wendy
Comment from jessizero
I found this to be very peaceful and relaxing. This is such a beautiful acrostic poem. Thanks for sharing this poem with the community and the world.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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I found this to be very peaceful and relaxing. This is such a beautiful acrostic poem. Thanks for sharing this poem with the community and the world.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much. What a very encouraging review - I appreciate it greatly.
Wendy