His Promise
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Comment from amahra
Woo hoo! I enjoyed The Mamas and The Papas' song even though I was not a fan. The poem was beautiful. To me Monday is the equivalent of the Bible's Morning, "Weeping endures for a night, but joy comes in the morning." In your case, or ( in the poem's case) your Monday and the Bible's Morning represents the same. Just my opinion. Great job as always. Love your poems, they have such meaning.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Woo hoo! I enjoyed The Mamas and The Papas' song even though I was not a fan. The poem was beautiful. To me Monday is the equivalent of the Bible's Morning, "Weeping endures for a night, but joy comes in the morning." In your case, or ( in the poem's case) your Monday and the Bible's Morning represents the same. Just my opinion. Great job as always. Love your poems, they have such meaning.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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What a beautiful interpretation of this piece, "A". Thank you also for the bling of the 6. Big hug.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from karenina
First, thanks for that song! It's "been a minute"--as the kids say! Great free verse.
Well presented with the blood red lines...great
repeating " Monday's coming..." Seems we're always chasing peace of mind, or running from lack of it! Like the song says, "sometimes it just works out that way..."
Karenina
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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First, thanks for that song! It's "been a minute"--as the kids say! Great free verse.
Well presented with the blood red lines...great
repeating " Monday's coming..." Seems we're always chasing peace of mind, or running from lack of it! Like the song says, "sometimes it just works out that way..."
Karenina
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Thank you, "K" for the lovely review of this piece. I feel I grow with each review. Even the bad ones. :)
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Oh! I never saw the point in "bad" reviews! I read a poet on site that was delighted to join! Three posts in, after three stars and one star she PM'd me, saying she thought she had a flair for writing but apparently was wrong. She quit. She was thirteen!--I still wonder if she'll ever dare to share her work again!--Karenina
Comment from K.L. Rockquemore
Beautiful poem! The image you chose is perfect. The red text is effective. The whole color story adds to the mood of your words. Your topic is relatable to all and honest.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Beautiful poem! The image you chose is perfect. The red text is effective. The whole color story adds to the mood of your words. Your topic is relatable to all and honest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hello again, KLR thank you for the awesome review. It's a pleasure to see your name in my reviews.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from patcelaw
When we make a promise, we need to do everything in our power to keep said promise. May you find your weekend filled to overflowing with blessings from God, who is faithful to keep His promises
Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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When we make a promise, we need to do everything in our power to keep said promise. May you find your weekend filled to overflowing with blessings from God, who is faithful to keep His promises
Patricia
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hi Pat, thank you for this wonderful review. I am so grateful.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Carolyn Dooley
The picture is lovely. It goes perfectly with your message. Thank you for writing such a powerful poem with a heartfelt story. Keep up the great work. Have a great day.
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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The picture is lovely. It goes perfectly with your message. Thank you for writing such a powerful poem with a heartfelt story. Keep up the great work. Have a great day.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Hello there, Carolyn. I absolutely love seeing new faces in my reviews. I will have to jump over and return the favor :)
Thank you so much for this wonderful review.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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Thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' His Promise ', is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. With craft and skill. This talented poet as told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post!!
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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' His Promise ', is an exceptionally well-written and deftly descriptive piece. With craft and skill. This talented poet as told it as it is. I look forward to seeing your next post!!
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 25-Feb-2022
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Duchess, you so honor me with this amazing review. Speechless in fact.
Thank you so very much.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Missy, you certainly deserved the amazing review.
Bless you and have a great week end,
the Duchess
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your free verse poem is creatively written, very descriptive, and moving.
Your symbolic use of "Monday" in reference to a promise one makes to
himself, but Monday keeps moving into the distance, is very effective.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Your free verse poem is creatively written, very descriptive, and moving.
Your symbolic use of "Monday" in reference to a promise one makes to
himself, but Monday keeps moving into the distance, is very effective.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you so much Janice. Every review is a treasure to me :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from jessizero
This was very sad and beautiful at the same time. I know how it feels to be tortured by something day and night. You captured the emotions very well.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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This was very sad and beautiful at the same time. I know how it feels to be tortured by something day and night. You captured the emotions very well.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Thank you and I am sorry that you ever experienced anything remotely like this.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Jay Squires
WOW! And your poem caught me with my sixes down. Your poem is a triumph, Missy. At first I thought it was a religious poem, largely because of "HIS PROMISE". This was so unexpected, though, and so very, very impactful. I am stunned! Thank you, my dear, for showing me a deep side of yourself.
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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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WOW! And your poem caught me with my sixes down. Your poem is a triumph, Missy. At first I thought it was a religious poem, largely because of "HIS PROMISE". This was so unexpected, though, and so very, very impactful. I am stunned! Thank you, my dear, for showing me a deep side of yourself.
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Comment Written 24-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2022
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Now I am smiling like the cat who ate the canary :)
Your review is a 7 to me, Mr. Squires. Thank you so very much.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy