Can You See now
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Comment from RodG
This is a fun read. We can easily see him choosing HER from all the other glasses. "She" does sound exactly like the rejected girl friend when he trades her for contact lenses. I love your closer. Rod
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This is a fun read. We can easily see him choosing HER from all the other glasses. "She" does sound exactly like the rejected girl friend when he trades her for contact lenses. I love your closer. Rod
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL, what a great creative entry for the contest, I think what you wrote is what this contest is after, good luck in the contest. I really like the "frame you handsomely" and the "eye candy." Excellent job!
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LOL, what a great creative entry for the contest, I think what you wrote is what this contest is after, good luck in the contest. I really like the "frame you handsomely" and the "eye candy." Excellent job!
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2022
