Deadly Seeds
A Senryu for the Haiku club challenge11 total reviews
Comment from Debbie Pope
I like this, June. I have no patience for gossipers. They are insecure, unkind, and short-sighted. Don't they have something better to do?
I do have one suggestion. I think that I would use wilt instead of die. It seems more in keeping with the blooming idea.
Thanks for sharing this one.
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I like this, June. I have no patience for gossipers. They are insecure, unkind, and short-sighted. Don't they have something better to do?
I do have one suggestion. I think that I would use wilt instead of die. It seems more in keeping with the blooming idea.
Thanks for sharing this one.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2022
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I like your suggestion. Will revise it now. Thanks!
