Now I See Me
Catching up with my life...49 total reviews
Comment from Tom Horonzy
I agree in the majority however forgetting history oft times leads to repeating mistakes, and as the adage goes, if so and you expect a change, you're crazy.
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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I agree in the majority however forgetting history oft times leads to repeating mistakes, and as the adage goes, if so and you expect a change, you're crazy.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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I have experienced change over my life, over and over actually... and have enjoyed my ability to let go and grow... Thank God for the ability to grow from life's mistakes. thanks for your stellar review. very appreciated. yours,
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Mirror, Mirror contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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This is a very well written poem you have penned for the Mirror, Mirror contest. You used very good descriptive words and very good imagery from the art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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thanks everso Teri!
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You are so welcome!!!
Comment from RGstar
I don't know who wrote this, as much as should be, being part of the rule. It is beautifully written. Any author would be proud of it. Nicely balanced. Ekphrastic, perhaps, yet how well it is written, incorporating the photograph, of course, the descriptive value is unforced and beautifully projected.
Good luck with this. I writer's poem.
Best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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I don't know who wrote this, as much as should be, being part of the rule. It is beautifully written. Any author would be proud of it. Nicely balanced. Ekphrastic, perhaps, yet how well it is written, incorporating the photograph, of course, the descriptive value is unforced and beautifully projected.
Good luck with this. I writer's poem.
Best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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RG... I am humbled and honored by this eloquent and thoughtful review... thanks so very much... yours,
Comment from June Sargent
Sometimes we imagine our dreams are better than our reality - but that is not always the case.
Shedding self-doubt
rejoining a life already in progress;
I throw the intruder one last glimpse
then cast off the illusion she represents.
Glad you regained your focus.
Nice entry for the contest. Should do well,
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Sometimes we imagine our dreams are better than our reality - but that is not always the case.
Shedding self-doubt
rejoining a life already in progress;
I throw the intruder one last glimpse
then cast off the illusion she represents.
Glad you regained your focus.
Nice entry for the contest. Should do well,
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Anne Johnston
"Shedding self-doubt
rejoining a life already in progress;
I throw the intruder one last glimpse
then cast off the illusion she represents."
Good entry for the Mirror contest. When one looks into the mirror, we often see what we once were, but I like the thought of forgetting the past and looking forward to the future.
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"Shedding self-doubt
rejoining a life already in progress;
I throw the intruder one last glimpse
then cast off the illusion she represents."
Good entry for the Mirror contest. When one looks into the mirror, we often see what we once were, but I like the thought of forgetting the past and looking forward to the future.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Janet Foor
A thought provoking poem of untangling your thoughts. Sometimes peering at our reflection and seeing a stranger peering back can do that. I especially liked the penultimate stanza.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
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A thought provoking poem of untangling your thoughts. Sometimes peering at our reflection and seeing a stranger peering back can do that. I especially liked the penultimate stanza.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from Terry Broxson
An excellent poem for this contest; I think it could do really well; good luck. The more times I read it, the better it gets. Of course, I could be just slow on the uptake. The ability to look at one's life and see and hear through all the noise of living, just to shed it and not look back, is pretty cool. Excellent job!
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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An excellent poem for this contest; I think it could do really well; good luck. The more times I read it, the better it gets. Of course, I could be just slow on the uptake. The ability to look at one's life and see and hear through all the noise of living, just to shed it and not look back, is pretty cool. Excellent job!
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
reply by the author on 04-Mar-2022
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Thanks so much for your five-plus stars... I am humbled and grateful for your review... your words are encouraging... yours,
Comment from jessizero
I liked the way you moved on at the end. It takes courage to do that. You did a great job with this poem for the "mirror mirror" contest. Best of luck to you.
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I liked the way you moved on at the end. It takes courage to do that. You did a great job with this poem for the "mirror mirror" contest. Best of luck to you.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's amazing what our reflections mean to us. The way we see ourselves. Not always the way others see us. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and it caused me to ponder as I read. That's always a good thing. Good luck with the contest.
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It's amazing what our reflections mean to us. The way we see ourselves. Not always the way others see us. Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading and it caused me to ponder as I read. That's always a good thing. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a well written free verse poem that tells of accepting the past and letting it go so you can live in the present. It shows strength and hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
dragonpoet
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This is a well written free verse poem that tells of accepting the past and letting it go so you can live in the present. It shows strength and hope.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay heatlhy
dragonpoet
Comment Written 04-Mar-2022
