Together
When love has it's own design18 total reviews
Comment from Begin Again
Beautiful, my friend. Love satisfies our heart but it must also satisfy our partners or it can grow and blossom. Thank you for sharing your heartwarming words.
Hugs, Carol
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Beautiful, my friend. Love satisfies our heart but it must also satisfy our partners or it can grow and blossom. Thank you for sharing your heartwarming words.
Hugs, Carol
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I am happy you liked this one, Carol. Sometimes I wonder if reading love stories or poems, causes you pain. Mainly because you had found and been loved by your soulmate.
Sorry for my ramble.
Again, thank you for the wonderful review sweet, sweet lady.
Always
Justafan of yours(I hope you know)
Missy
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I can not tell a lite, I do feel lost and hurt at times, but the memories are far stronger and cherished. I fingers are spilling out love stories the past couple of days... normally something I steer clear of. I cry throughout but I know I am sharing our love, I miss him so but I keep telling myself he is here.
Hugs, Carol
Comment from karenina
Love your poetry and impressed with the presentation! Truly free form poetry in every respect! Perfect theme for Valentine's Day fast approaching...
Karenina
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Love your poetry and impressed with the presentation! Truly free form poetry in every respect! Perfect theme for Valentine's Day fast approaching...
Karenina
Comment Written 12-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hello Ms Karenina. I have seen your name in other reviews and I am delighted to see it here. :)
Thank you for the kindness.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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Wow. You've been on since 2015 and we've never crossed? I just fanned you-
Karenina
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Thank you xx
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Together ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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' Together ' , is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review.
Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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This humble poet is honored by this lovely review.
Thank you very much.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Missy, you certainly deserved the lovely review.
Bless you,
the Duchess
Comment from JanPerry
I'm sorry your dream of being a reporter fell through. I'm sure you would have graced many a tv screen with such a pretty face.
The poem seems misplaced. The Fears capital should follow from He listened to her fears, hopes and dreams. Watch the punctuation.
Time and time again writers and philosophers have told women not to expect to find a complete set with a person. But as a woman we keep trying to complete ourselves with another.
Women's independence is solely reliant on being alone and pursuing the dream. Correct me if I'm wrong. Marriage and babies come second in my opinion. But each person is entirely different and I am entirely different from others.
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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I'm sorry your dream of being a reporter fell through. I'm sure you would have graced many a tv screen with such a pretty face.
The poem seems misplaced. The Fears capital should follow from He listened to her fears, hopes and dreams. Watch the punctuation.
Time and time again writers and philosophers have told women not to expect to find a complete set with a person. But as a woman we keep trying to complete ourselves with another.
Women's independence is solely reliant on being alone and pursuing the dream. Correct me if I'm wrong. Marriage and babies come second in my opinion. But each person is entirely different and I am entirely different from others.
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Thank you for your thoughts and insights.
I, for one believe each of us find fulfillment through love. It is in the giving of love we find our true selves.
Thank you for the chance again to enjoy this exchange :)
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from lancellot
Ah, this is a winner if I ever heard one. It speaks to what love between two people should be. The making of a whole human from two incomplete people. There is a great deal of truth and heart in this. Perhaps a true story?
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Ah, this is a winner if I ever heard one. It speaks to what love between two people should be. The making of a whole human from two incomplete people. There is a great deal of truth and heart in this. Perhaps a true story?
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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As a romantic at heart, I truly believe in love.
Thank you for this beautiful review :) The 6 is a bonus.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from amahra
Wow, you are really good at getting to the essence of romantic feelings people have for one another. I like your word choices as well as the typography. The opening stanza set the pace. The artwork is so intimate--nose to nose, lip to lip.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Wow, you are really good at getting to the essence of romantic feelings people have for one another. I like your word choices as well as the typography. The opening stanza set the pace. The artwork is so intimate--nose to nose, lip to lip.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2022
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Hiya "A"!
Thank you for spending a few minutes of your valuable time with me here. A 6? I?m truly blessed!
Thank you my lovely friend x
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
Well well I was intrigued thank you for capturing the moment for me well done thanks again keep up the good work His shows you are talented thank you For sharing this
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Well well I was intrigued thank you for capturing the moment for me well done thanks again keep up the good work His shows you are talented thank you For sharing this
Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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And GG, I am blessed by this wonderful review :)
Thank you
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Melodie Michelle
Perfect entry for the Free Form Poetry Contest with the best of wishes in the contest my friend! The words are smooth and not forced at all! The imagery is spot on trying it all together for a lovely presentation;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you!
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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Perfect entry for the Free Form Poetry Contest with the best of wishes in the contest my friend! The words are smooth and not forced at all! The imagery is spot on trying it all together for a lovely presentation;-)
Thank you for sharing and many blessings to you!
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Comment Written 11-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2022
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Well, hello Melodie. Thank you for the much-appreciated R&R. I value each one. Together they make for better writes. I think I grow with each one I get.
Again, thank you
Always
Justafan
Missy