Evil
The serpent16 total reviews
Comment from scongrove
This is very deep, my friend. And so very true. We all have two sides. A good side and an evil side. We are given free will to choose the right path. We can't go back and change our sinful past, but we can start fresh and walk the way God intended us to.
I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
Your fan,
Shana :)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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This is very deep, my friend. And so very true. We all have two sides. A good side and an evil side. We are given free will to choose the right path. We can't go back and change our sinful past, but we can start fresh and walk the way God intended us to.
I really enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing!
Your fan,
Shana :)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi there Shana. I had all but given up writing, but I have some wonderful friends who encourage me so ....
Thank you for being one of those friends xx
Always
Justafan of yours and friend as well
Missy
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Never stop writing. The world needs to see your gift. :)
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Big hug
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Dear Melissa,
This is absolutely different from your normal romance poems. But I love it. Your words are so creative. It flows so well. Your choice of artwork is fantastic. Fabulous job my friend.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Dear Melissa,
This is absolutely different from your normal romance poems. But I love it. Your words are so creative. It flows so well. Your choice of artwork is fantastic. Fabulous job my friend.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you my lovely friend xx
Your reviews keep me writing
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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Thank you for allowing me the opportunity to read your work, my friend.
Love ya
Darlene
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
this has a clear message to it but it's the form which drives the reader through rather than that message. Good solid word choice, quite emotive.
I think the font colour for the writing clashes a little with the red background. A straight black may be better - just a thought.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hi there,
this has a clear message to it but it's the form which drives the reader through rather than that message. Good solid word choice, quite emotive.
I think the font colour for the writing clashes a little with the red background. A straight black may be better - just a thought.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I haven't seen your name in my reviews in a good long while. I have made the changes you suggested.
Thank you so much for the kind review.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from SimianSavant
Thank you for this great poem about Mark Zuckerberg! Content is fine -- I think you could significantly enhance the appearance by using a black background with red text. Thanks for the read!
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Thank you for this great poem about Mark Zuckerberg! Content is fine -- I think you could significantly enhance the appearance by using a black background with red text. Thanks for the read!
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Hahahaha. I can actually see the resemblance. Oh my goodness, I am still laughing. Thank you for the giggles and the review.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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Haha you're most welcome
Comment from Ric Myworld
Yes, we can try to fight the wickedness, but for me, the serpent usually wins. Not slithering, hidden in the grass, but lying in wait, fighting those temptations for as long as I can. LOL. This is very different from most of your posts. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Yes, we can try to fight the wickedness, but for me, the serpent usually wins. Not slithering, hidden in the grass, but lying in wait, fighting those temptations for as long as I can. LOL. This is very different from most of your posts. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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I usually stay away from religious stuff because beliefs vary so much.
Thank you, Ric for always being in my reviews. That makes my heart smile.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
Comment from Begin Again
Wicked picture! I am struggling and fighting with those demons in my house at the moment and I pray that all my prayers and angels will end this battle. Your poem is perfectly suited to the situation and very well done.
Hugs, Carol
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Wicked picture! I am struggling and fighting with those demons in my house at the moment and I pray that all my prayers and angels will end this battle. Your poem is perfectly suited to the situation and very well done.
Hugs, Carol
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2022
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2022
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Aww thank you, Carol. I have never written anything about religious beliefs because they are so varied. But, when I saw this picture, I was compelled to do so.
Thank you again my friend.
Always
Justafan of yours
Missy
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You did it beyond well...it is perfect!
