Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

You have a wonderful memory here of your Mother and yourself on your nature walks and you recalled it all in this beautiful poem, I enjoyed the journey too, good luck with the contest, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, I appreciate it. :)

Comment from WriterHeather

Exceptional

Great job on this beautiful poem. The words flow nicely and I enjoyed the sweet sentiment your words convey. The imagery you use make it easy to connect your memories to the season of spring.

 Comment Written 24-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

Thanks so much, this is unbelievable. :)

Comment from Tom Horonzy

Good

Elementary enlightenment by a sixth grader? Memories of long ago when the two of you began to go to grow and know each other better than previously. Good job

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2022

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reply by the author on 24-Jan-2022

Thanks.