Magic Dream
A sip of magic dew in a magic garden.14 total reviews
Comment from poetwatch
Aren't we all children at play, author? :) Such a lively imagination you have. I wish my pen would run wild so that my muse would then come up with something I adore. This is a very entertaining entry for "The Drink Poetry." Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Aren't we all children at play, author? :) Such a lively imagination you have. I wish my pen would run wild so that my muse would then come up with something I adore. This is a very entertaining entry for "The Drink Poetry." Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much for your kind review and the wonderful blessing of six stars. I appreciate the honor, and fantasy is one of my favorite types of poetry and story themes to write. Lost my sister a few years ago and always think of her as I write. It helps. Thank you again and God bless.
Comment from moongirlwriter
What a sweet poem of fantasy. I could see this develop into a wonderful children's story. Especially between child, fantasy and grandpa. Best of luck with this well-written piece. I so enjoyed reading, it put a smile on my face. :)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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What a sweet poem of fantasy. I could see this develop into a wonderful children's story. Especially between child, fantasy and grandpa. Best of luck with this well-written piece. I so enjoyed reading, it put a smile on my face. :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I am entertaining your idea of turning the theme of this poem into a story. Great idea and I thank you for prompting me to think about it. Thanks for your kind review. Have a great New Year and God bless.
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I wonderful walk through the garden with magical shoes and angel wings, rainbow scenes and fun fantasy times, a wonderland of flowers and sweet times, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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I wonderful walk through the garden with magical shoes and angel wings, rainbow scenes and fun fantasy times, a wonderland of flowers and sweet times, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thank you, Dolly, for your kind review. I always have fun writing the fantasy themed poems and stories. Here is hoping the New Year is treating you well. Take care and God bless.
Comment from Terry Broxson
A very creative poem for this contest, I think it should do well, good luck. I was not sure where you were going with it. I was thinking maybe the child turns into a hummingbird. But the dream works very well.
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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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A very creative poem for this contest, I think it should do well, good luck. I was not sure where you were going with it. I was thinking maybe the child turns into a hummingbird. But the dream works very well.
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Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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What a great idea. The child turning into a hummingbird. Novel, to say the least, but I like it. Thanks for the great review. I am always open to new ideas and welcome them in reviews. Have a great New Year and God bless.