What could go wrong?
Always ask yourself ...29 total reviews
Comment from Terry Broxson
LOL! a great story for this contest, it should do well, good luck. Indeed, what could possibly go wrong given all the history of these kids. I see it is fiction but has the ring of truth, which makes it great fiction.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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LOL! a great story for this contest, it should do well, good luck. Indeed, what could possibly go wrong given all the history of these kids. I see it is fiction but has the ring of truth, which makes it great fiction.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Terry. A super review. Several parts were true, some fiction intertwined!
Wendy
Comment from BLACKTITANIUM86
Yeah...That's what "Murphy's Law" is all about. For, if anything
can happen, it definitely will. And you did your thing, to the point
where one can actually tell, that you are a seasoned writer. Keep Writing
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Yeah...That's what "Murphy's Law" is all about. For, if anything
can happen, it definitely will. And you did your thing, to the point
where one can actually tell, that you are a seasoned writer. Keep Writing
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much for your super review! Much appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL I couldn't help but laugh. I raised four very active and 'what could possibly go wrong boys.' I completely understand. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I loved it.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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LOL I couldn't help but laugh. I raised four very active and 'what could possibly go wrong boys.' I completely understand. Thank you for sharing this writing prompt with us. I loved it.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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What a super review - yes, you understand perfectly! Thanks so much.
Wendy
Comment from lancellot
Yeah, what could go wrong? These were a nice group of mini tales where... life happened. Fun vs. Risk seem to be the way life works. We can not dwell on what could go wrong and live life to the fullest it seems.
Good contest entry.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Yeah, what could go wrong? These were a nice group of mini tales where... life happened. Fun vs. Risk seem to be the way life works. We can not dwell on what could go wrong and live life to the fullest it seems.
Good contest entry.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much - I appreciate your great review. Yes, Fun vs Risk does seem to sum it up well.
Wendy
Comment from Patty Palmer
Murphy's Law: What can go wrong will go wrong! It seems that anything they tell the little brother to do he got hurt. I liked this story because the little brother is gulllible and does what they tell him. I don't want to even think about what could happen in a hot air balloon. I think he better pass on that one. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Murphy's Law: What can go wrong will go wrong! It seems that anything they tell the little brother to do he got hurt. I liked this story because the little brother is gulllible and does what they tell him. I don't want to even think about what could happen in a hot air balloon. I think he better pass on that one. Good luck with the contest.
Patty
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Patty for your super review. Fortunately the last bit was fiction (and some other bits too). Lol.
Wendy
Comment from BethShelby
With sisters like these two well-meaning girls, by the time he reached twenty-one alive, he had learned that whatever they suggested might surely go wrong. This story is painfully funny. It has a good ending with his look of horror. Nice entry for the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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With sisters like these two well-meaning girls, by the time he reached twenty-one alive, he had learned that whatever they suggested might surely go wrong. This story is painfully funny. It has a good ending with his look of horror. Nice entry for the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you Beth for your super review, which I greatly appreciate, as always. Yes, you are right - everything goes wrong for him, poor chap! Luckily some is fiction ....
Wendy
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You made me smile here and the antics of my Grandson come to mind as he is always getting himself into scrapes as boys always do! Falling through a plate glass door is very dangerous! Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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You made me smile here and the antics of my Grandson come to mind as he is always getting himself into scrapes as boys always do! Falling through a plate glass door is very dangerous! Love Dolly x
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Dolly. Lovely review.
Wendy
Comment from Begin Again
Run for your life and don't look back, Dan. These two girls are risky business when it comes to your life. I wouldn't take a chance on them.
Wonderful entry, WEndy.
Hugs, CArol
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Run for your life and don't look back, Dan. These two girls are risky business when it comes to your life. I wouldn't take a chance on them.
Wonderful entry, WEndy.
Hugs, CArol
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thanks so much Carol. Fortunately the ending (and some other bits and pieces), was fiction .... Love your review. Appreciated.
Wendy
Comment from Judy Lawless
This is a great family story, Wendy, with a perfect title. The first mishap reminded me of one at my house when my son was little. He was jumping on the girls bed and fell off, hitting his head on the corner of a wooden doll cradle. Off to the hospital I took him, for stitches.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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This is a great family story, Wendy, with a perfect title. The first mishap reminded me of one at my house when my son was little. He was jumping on the girls bed and fell off, hitting his head on the corner of a wooden doll cradle. Off to the hospital I took him, for stitches.
Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 19-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Judy. I appreciate your super review. Probably many families experienced a few similar disasters. Lol.
Wendy
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You?re welcome, Wendy. You?re probably right. :)
Comment from Annmuma
You made me smile! Loved it. Great contest entry. A fun story that every family can identify with and not even any spag that I could find. I wish good luck in the contest -- you may not need it! ann
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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You made me smile! Loved it. Great contest entry. A fun story that every family can identify with and not even any spag that I could find. I wish good luck in the contest -- you may not need it! ann
Comment Written 18-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 18-Jan-2022
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Your good luck wishes are greatly appreciated, I'm sure I will need them. Lol. SO glad you enjoyed my story. Your review was very encouraging, and I value it. Thanks heaps.
Wendy