One Thousand Cranes
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
Haha. Lies can grow in a infertile land. It's very realistic and you did great job to use the desolate park as a metaphor to tell this failed love story.
Well done.
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Haha. Lies can grow in a infertile land. It's very realistic and you did great job to use the desolate park as a metaphor to tell this failed love story.
Well done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Lisa, for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
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Comment from dovemarie
Dear Gypsy, thanks for another of your short, insightful, full of feeling poems. I liked the picture - it really made me feel dark and "desolate," and I liked the background color, it really went with the poem. Dove
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Dear Gypsy, thanks for another of your short, insightful, full of feeling poems. I liked the picture - it really made me feel dark and "desolate," and I liked the background color, it really went with the poem. Dove
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much, Marie :)
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Comment from royowen
I love the contrasting and yet joined by necessity in your fabulous haiku Gypsy, I could write something on certain people in the Bible who were dug up and re buried in the "right" place, I agree that some should be symbolically buried elsewhere. Perceptive you, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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I love the contrasting and yet joined by necessity in your fabulous haiku Gypsy, I could write something on certain people in the Bible who were dug up and re buried in the "right" place, I agree that some should be symbolically buried elsewhere. Perceptive you, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2022
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I was thinking about a catechism lesson about seeds planted on rocky ground ... I think it was Isaiah 6:9 but I could be wrong.
Thank you very much, Roy,
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Similar thing, it?s in at least 3 of the gospels, also thorny ground, it explains why some don?t really respond, beautifully done
Comment from prettybluebirds
I love your choice of artwork for this poem. It really enhances the message the writing is conveying. It's nicely written and easy enough to read and understand. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
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I love your choice of artwork for this poem. It really enhances the message the writing is conveying. It's nicely written and easy enough to read and understand. I look forward to reading more of your writings.
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Truly, lies cannot produce desired result, human nature leaves sign that is why truth reveals; desolate park is less effective; fake promises creates no result; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Truly, lies cannot produce desired result, human nature leaves sign that is why truth reveals; desolate park is less effective; fake promises creates no result; well said, well done; post more. ALCREATOR LITT DEAR (D R)
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2022
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Thank you very much for reading and reviewing my poem. :)
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