Mother Earth in Winter
Winter has such unique beauty12 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Aw, this is such a lovely haiku in 5-7-5 format. I love the illusion of winter as a beautiful woman dressed in a white coat. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Aw, this is such a lovely haiku in 5-7-5 format. I love the illusion of winter as a beautiful woman dressed in a white coat. Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the upcoming contest,
Sal XOs
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thank you so much Sally 🙂
Comment from robyn corum
Jo,
Absolutely. Breathtaking. That's the word that always comes to mind. The mind of God is so ... much more than I can fathom. That He can create such majesty and magnificence in every season. You have described it well.
One note:
--> dressed in (her) finest white coat
Thanks!
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reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Jo,
Absolutely. Breathtaking. That's the word that always comes to mind. The mind of God is so ... much more than I can fathom. That He can create such majesty and magnificence in every season. You have described it well.
One note:
--> dressed in (her) finest white coat
Thanks!
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Comment Written 04-Jan-2022
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2022
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Thankyou Robyn 🙂