He Donned
Humility - a poem46 total reviews
Comment from Raul1
Jesus Christ has sacrificed a lot for us all to have our precious freedom. He is our messiah. A beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing! Excellent work! It's inspirational.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Jesus Christ has sacrificed a lot for us all to have our precious freedom. He is our messiah. A beautiful poem. Thank you for sharing! Excellent work! It's inspirational.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Raul for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
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You're welcome and the same for you too!
Comment from judiverse
Your poem is a lovely telling of the birth of Christ, with the shepherds hearing the angel's voices and the three kings guided by a star, coming to pay tribute to the new-born Christ. He was God's gift, salvation coming to mankind. Excellent rhyme. Maybe you would consider using a larger font? Merry Christmas to you, and blessing for the New Year. judi
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Your poem is a lovely telling of the birth of Christ, with the shepherds hearing the angel's voices and the three kings guided by a star, coming to pay tribute to the new-born Christ. He was God's gift, salvation coming to mankind. Excellent rhyme. Maybe you would consider using a larger font? Merry Christmas to you, and blessing for the New Year. judi
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Judi, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
Comment from Mary Vigasin
A perfect and beautiful poem of the Nativity to read this Christmas Eve .
Your words are calming and inspiring to remind us the true meaning of Christmas.
Blessings and Merry Christmas.
Mary
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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A perfect and beautiful poem of the Nativity to read this Christmas Eve .
Your words are calming and inspiring to remind us the true meaning of Christmas.
Blessings and Merry Christmas.
Mary
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Mary, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
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And Happy New Year to you Roy. Blessings to you and family.
Mary
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You too Mary
Comment from Kit Nongkhlaw
Wonderful Christmas poem. The magic of your words and the way you weave this magic is sublime. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem and wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, Kit.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Wonderful Christmas poem. The magic of your words and the way you weave this magic is sublime. Thank you for sharing this wonderful poem and wishing you a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year, Kit.
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Kit, for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
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Happy New Year to you too, Kit
Comment from RShipp
'The master of deception came
to lay his cunning plan.
Yet only helped to serve God's will
salvation came to man.'
(I love you last verse! ... The planning of the fall of Christ- backfires!)
Enjoyed!
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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'The master of deception came
to lay his cunning plan.
Yet only helped to serve God's will
salvation came to man.'
(I love you last verse! ... The planning of the fall of Christ- backfires!)
Enjoyed!
Comment Written 24-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much for your terrific comments and a super review, happy new year, blessings Roy
Comment from forestport12
Nice cadence and flow along with strong verb choices. I like how you string together rhymes that deliver with rational and not forced. You told the story of his birth in a fresh and meaningful way. Love the scripture references too. Merry Christmas!
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Nice cadence and flow along with strong verb choices. I like how you string together rhymes that deliver with rational and not forced. You told the story of his birth in a fresh and meaningful way. Love the scripture references too. Merry Christmas!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Tina Crute
In my devotions this week, the Holy Spirit has impressed on me the humility of Jesus. All He wanted was to do God's will, not His own. I am writing a poem about it and will post next week. I just can't fathom, as a human, how selfless He had to be to accomplish that. I appreciate you, Roy, and your words:) This poem is moving and emotional and represents the golden truth and miracle of our Savior's birth....and in rhyme. Well done my friend!
Tina
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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In my devotions this week, the Holy Spirit has impressed on me the humility of Jesus. All He wanted was to do God's will, not His own. I am writing a poem about it and will post next week. I just can't fathom, as a human, how selfless He had to be to accomplish that. I appreciate you, Roy, and your words:) This poem is moving and emotional and represents the golden truth and miracle of our Savior's birth....and in rhyme. Well done my friend!
Tina
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thanks again Tina for these outstanding comments and a wonderful review, blessings Roy
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Your light shines bright, my friend! Well-deserved!
Tina
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Bless you
Comment from zanya
Here are stanzas to remind us of the story of Christmas and why He came to earth - stanza one is inspirational in sentiment and language - thanks for centring us on the spirit of Christmas
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Here are stanzas to remind us of the story of Christmas and why He came to earth - stanza one is inspirational in sentiment and language - thanks for centring us on the spirit of Christmas
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Zanya, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from Deniz22
Beautiful ode to our beautiful Savior.
He left the throne of glory to fulfill the old, old story.
May the Holy Spirit enable us to know Him better, love Him more deeply and serve Him more effectively to His glory.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Beautiful ode to our beautiful Savior.
He left the throne of glory to fulfill the old, old story.
May the Holy Spirit enable us to know Him better, love Him more deeply and serve Him more effectively to His glory.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thanks so much Dennis, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy
Comment from nomi338
Satan the Devil went too far and realized too late that he could not backtrack. He could not seek or ask for a do over. He must now live with the certain knowledge that his days are numbered. The one he sought to destroy will indeed be the one who will carry out his imprisonment and eventually his extermination. Unlike Satan, we have an opportunity to seek forgiveness and redemption. We should not hesitate.
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Satan the Devil went too far and realized too late that he could not backtrack. He could not seek or ask for a do over. He must now live with the certain knowledge that his days are numbered. The one he sought to destroy will indeed be the one who will carry out his imprisonment and eventually his extermination. Unlike Satan, we have an opportunity to seek forgiveness and redemption. We should not hesitate.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2021
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Thanks bro, for these excellent comments and a great review, merry Christmas and blessings Roy