Heart Crafted Poems -2021
Viewing comments for Chapter 28 "Son Of God"Musings of an old man -2021
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Comment from duchessofdrumborg
' Son of God ', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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' Son of God ', is an extremely well-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest. Please let me know how you get on?
Comment Written 10-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Hi Duchess, thanks a ton! I appreciate your inquiry and considering everything going on in our worlds all my stuff is manageable. I need to have kidney stone surgery Tuesday so this has become a Forced GOD Thing that requires me to reign from nay current consulting gig and slide back into full retirement mode ? 🙏🙏🎶👍👍🙃🙃
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Hi JLR,
On Tuesday you'll be on the top of my prayer list. Not a bad place to be 😊😊😊💋💋😉😉 :)))))
Please let me know how you get on?
the Duchess
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I appreciate your Prayers! 🙏🎶🎶
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You're welcome! Now your on my list you'll stay there! 😉😉😉 :)))))))
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello JLR,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting your faith in Jesus as well as your LOVE for Him who 'did' so that we may happily live!
2nd stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Good Luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Hello JLR,
Nice piece of Spiritual Poetry having impressive phraseology, smooth flow throughout from the beginning to the end with lovely rhyming scheme, and beautifully depicting your faith in Jesus as well as your LOVE for Him who 'did' so that we may happily live!
2nd stanza is particularly noteworthy.
Good Luck in the contest.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you 🙏🙏🎶🎶
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JLR, Most Welcome!
With best wishes,
~ RP
Comment from Cogitator
This is surely a sentimental view (also very personal) of a relationship shared by billions. To live a chaste life is virtually impossible in today's world. Nice sentiments...John
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This is surely a sentimental view (also very personal) of a relationship shared by billions. To live a chaste life is virtually impossible in today's world. Nice sentiments...John
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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John, thanks for your review, yes very personal, the wonderment of the billions of Uniquenesses each of contribute to this crazy world of ours, happiest of holidays. 🙏🙏🎶🎶👍
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely, reverent poem is a moving testimony of salvation, a joyous praise of the unique Savior, who changes our hearts when we believe in Him and ask Him to come in.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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This lovely, reverent poem is a moving testimony of salvation, a joyous praise of the unique Savior, who changes our hearts when we believe in Him and ask Him to come in.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Janice, thanks for your valued comments, Happy holidays?🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from karenina
I have been impacted by many of the posts for this "MY Faith Poetry" contest. This one too has touched my heart. I live in faith and will die believing there is eternal life and a merciful God awaiting. It's a deeply personal journey for each--I commend you for sharing!
Karenina
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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I have been impacted by many of the posts for this "MY Faith Poetry" contest. This one too has touched my heart. I live in faith and will die believing there is eternal life and a merciful God awaiting. It's a deeply personal journey for each--I commend you for sharing!
Karenina
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Karenina, thank you may you always experience the Highest and Best that Christ has prepared for you! 🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶
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My heart and soul are lifted by your wishes!
Karenina
Comment from dragonpoet
JLR,
This is a good answer to the prompt. It reminds us what being Christian means. We need to remember Christ's destiny on the cross was for our sakes not His.
Good luck and stay heatlhy
Merry Christmas
Joan
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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JLR,
This is a good answer to the prompt. It reminds us what being Christian means. We need to remember Christ's destiny on the cross was for our sakes not His.
Good luck and stay heatlhy
Merry Christmas
Joan
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Joan, I so value your validating comments, may you always experience the Highest and Best each day brings forth! 🙏🙏🎶🎶
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You're welcome, JLR.
Joan
Comment from RGstar
Just beautiful JLR. You know I am a fan of your writing.
By the way just swap places with 'did' and ' you'...its a question there. Just a little mistake...can't go that round.
''death that did you cheat.
'death that you did cheat.
This poem is light, bountiful and giving, just the way it should be for a poem of this nature.
''as I scribe here''
Beautiful ending...as poetic, as endearing.
Bravo.
Great writing.
My best wishes.
Have a great Christmas.
My best.
RG
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Just beautiful JLR. You know I am a fan of your writing.
By the way just swap places with 'did' and ' you'...its a question there. Just a little mistake...can't go that round.
''death that did you cheat.
'death that you did cheat.
This poem is light, bountiful and giving, just the way it should be for a poem of this nature.
''as I scribe here''
Beautiful ending...as poetic, as endearing.
Bravo.
Great writing.
My best wishes.
Have a great Christmas.
My best.
RG
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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RG, I am so honored to read your validating words. We each are given the same breath of life and what JOY I can measure by reading your comments and your works presented here in. I am also a big fan! Merriest of Christmas joys. May 2022 be filled with the Highest and Best that the Christ has prepared for you, 🙏🙏🎶🎶🎶
Comment from lyenochka
A wonderful meditation, Jim! I especially liked "that your dying was your destiny" because it show the intentionality of the Lord's plan of sacrifice for our salvation. Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestion:
"but of the death that did you cheat."
How about "but of the death that you did cheat."
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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A wonderful meditation, Jim! I especially liked "that your dying was your destiny" because it show the intentionality of the Lord's plan of sacrifice for our salvation. Best wishes in the contest!
Suggestion:
"but of the death that did you cheat."
How about "but of the death that you did cheat."
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Thank you and yes most certainly.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
This spoke to me of the sacrifice made for me and you - without complaint or hesitation, that we may go to Him at our end and live forever in heaven that will take away our pain and illnesses. The artwork is stunning and just glows with promise. I am glad to know you believe!!
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This spoke to me of the sacrifice made for me and you - without complaint or hesitation, that we may go to Him at our end and live forever in heaven that will take away our pain and illnesses. The artwork is stunning and just glows with promise. I am glad to know you believe!!
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Sherry - my! My! Oh, MY! You kind words and extra star ⭐️ for this writing is very special too me. I especially hope that you experience the Highest and Best in all things and all prayers answered this holiday season and the New Year.🙏🙏🙏🎶🎶
Comment from Tina Crute
This is such an uplifting poem, that celebrates the reason for this season. I like the blinding light picture because this is what I imagine God looks like. I like the first person writing where you are talking to God totally opening up about how grateful you are :-) Wonderful entry for the contest!
Tina
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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This is such an uplifting poem, that celebrates the reason for this season. I like the blinding light picture because this is what I imagine God looks like. I like the first person writing where you are talking to God totally opening up about how grateful you are :-) Wonderful entry for the contest!
Tina
Comment Written 09-Dec-2021
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2021
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Tina, your comments have touched my heart filled with gratitude. May you always be carried in the Palm of God?s hand over any troubled waters. 🎶🎶🙏🎼
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JLR, thank you for the heartfelt blessing! I appreciate your work that shines light to others:)
Have a good weekend, friend!
Tina