Comment from Earl Corp

Excellent

You did a good job with the contest prompt. You wrote a 2-10-2 that made perfect sense. I really enjoyed reading this piece. Very nice job. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021

Thanks, Earl

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry is in good form, Mystery Author. Good job with the syllable count per line. The words plus picture pair perfectly. I like the theme of your poem.
Bet wishes in the contest, Jan

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021

Thank you, Jan

Comment from Lana Marie

Exceptional

Well, you accomplished the writing prompt two syllables, 10 and then two again. I do like the picture that you used, I think that's where a lot of us first started writing was born on our "diaries"/journals" that we got as young children.

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021

Thank you, Lana, for the terrific review.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

What an idyllic picture of a young girl writing and reflecting, I think dreaming starts at a very young age, and so it should, it did for me. A beautifully scribed 2/10/2 post, good luck, blessings Roy

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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021

Thank you, Roy

reply by royowen on 29-Nov-2021

Most welcome

Comment from L. Stewart

Good

Gorgeous entry. Simplistic and effective. Love the choice of picture also, inspiring young minds to be imaginative and share their thoughts, even if it's just personally.


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 Comment Written 28-Nov-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2021

Thank you, L.