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Charity by Proxy

Blindsided by unwanted houseguest

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Comment from aryr
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A good picture Elizabeth. Perhaps Scott should instruct Janice to talk to Mrs. Barr, after all she now has two vacant bedrooms. But I will safely guess he did not do that despite his worries. Very well done and enjoyed.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
reply by aryr on 12-Nov-2021
    You are so welcome Elizabeth.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I need to ask the obvious question why couldn't Mrs. Barr take this striking russet-haired woman in her house? If I was Scott, I think I would ask that question. I am pretty sure he did not and took the lady in. Right?

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
Comment from Judy Lawless
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So apparently Mrs. Barr is trying to take advantage of Scott's generous heart, for her own advantage. A great Christian woman she is. I hope Scott suggested the woman might ask Mrs. Bar for a room.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
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Scott sounds like a great guy. And a clever one :) He certainly solved that situation to his advantage - that basement did not sound nice. Charity seems to bounce around like a happy little balloon. You write the sweetest stories filled with whimsy and humor. Wouldn't miss a one. Well presented!!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Thanks for that!

    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Sounds like Mrs. Barr, with the extra bedroom, would rather inconvenience Scott than herself, which would seem to be typical of most. But my biggest question would be: was there a huge reason Mrs. Barr didn't want to be saddled with Janice for the night . . . Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
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What contrasting personalities!. Personality is what makes a person unique, a characteristic of behaving, thinking, and feeling. Like the good man Scott in this case. A positive personality trait includes being honest and taking responsibility . Admirable. The opposite of his good trait is the mean and selfish behaviour of Mrs Barr . An interesting case study. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
Comment from BethShelby
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Theres are people like that who helpfully point the way to other for favors, but wouldn't think of opening thier own homes to someone in need. I'll bet Mrs. Barr didn't even considered the possiblity she had a spare room.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
Comment from Begin Again
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Why is it that the ones who are in tight economical positions themselves find others dumping more on their plate instead of stepping up and doing their fair share? Scott is one of rare ones in this society of ours... I hope God has a very special place set aside for him.

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.

    What you say about Scott goes triple for you!
reply by Begin Again on 12-Nov-2021
    Thank you!
Comment from royowen
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Ho very interesting fear Liz, you're friends with someone, who's very kind and spontaneously so, but very sacrificial, that's the old fashioned European, Elaine and I stayed with a French couple in France near Strasburg, let us sleep in their bed, while they slept in the attic for a week, well done, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 09-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 12-Nov-2021
    Sorry to say the gist is true--I fudged the fluff, as to his provisions. The woman is still there, making herself comfy. Mrs. Barr stays afar! Alas, her spare bedrooms have "stuff" in them.
reply by royowen on 12-Nov-2021
    Wow
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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Scott is a warm-hearted person despite of his own situation. I really think he should be given an award for helping people. I guess Janice must be Mrs. Barr's granddaughter. People do seem to take advantage of Scott's kindness.

Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Nov-2021


reply by the author on 09-Nov-2021
    No--not her granddaughter--the point is that Mrs. Barr has two spare rooms.