Dawn's new light -
A modified quatern31 total reviews
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
Hi Roy,
A very well written poem, my friend. It is sweet and touching. What a wonderful promise to make. You go through the things you can't give, but the intangible ones, the ones that really count, you provide.
A priceless gift to the woman you love. Delightful, pure and very expertly penned.
Blessings on you and your dear wife,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Hi Roy,
A very well written poem, my friend. It is sweet and touching. What a wonderful promise to make. You go through the things you can't give, but the intangible ones, the ones that really count, you provide.
A priceless gift to the woman you love. Delightful, pure and very expertly penned.
Blessings on you and your dear wife,
Rhonda
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Rhonda, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from AnnaLinda
Wow, Roy...you've outdone yourself with this very powerful and talented love poem for Elaine!
Your modified quatern
seems perfectly written within those perimeters.
Your love and heart come shining through this talented work. A treasured gift for your live I'm sure.
Thanks so much for sharing.
AnnaLinda
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Wow, Roy...you've outdone yourself with this very powerful and talented love poem for Elaine!
Your modified quatern
seems perfectly written within those perimeters.
Your love and heart come shining through this talented work. A treasured gift for your live I'm sure.
Thanks so much for sharing.
AnnaLinda
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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You have been so generous to this unworthy recipient, thank you, thank you, blessings Roy
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Very welcome, Sir!
Comment from Deniz22
You have an amazing talent. I am always pleased to see the uniform high quality of your work. There is no tapering off, even though you produce a good quantity of works. Does it come easily to you or do you have to work at it? God bless, brother! Keep them coming!
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You have an amazing talent. I am always pleased to see the uniform high quality of your work. There is no tapering off, even though you produce a good quantity of works. Does it come easily to you or do you have to work at it? God bless, brother! Keep them coming!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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God has been good to me Denis, I had to become a servant of God to find out where my gifts lie, I spent some years touring with a gospel group of my own making, it?s a long story, I sometimes want to switch the gift off, but that could be silly, but you have been kind to me, you know how it is, a gift ultimately belongs to Him. I?m just a humble but grateful child. Thank you dear brother. Roy
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a beautiful love poem with excellent rhyme, a lyrical rhythm and visual imagery. I would much rather have a promise of lasting love and continue presence than riches and such. You wife is very fortunate.
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This is a beautiful love poem with excellent rhyme, a lyrical rhythm and visual imagery. I would much rather have a promise of lasting love and continue presence than riches and such. You wife is very fortunate.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Mary, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome.
Comment from robyn corum
I cannot bring you dawn's new light,
but I'll be there through lonely nights.
Roy,
When you set aside all that mostly unimportant romantic stuff and get down to the absolute brass tacks of a relationship, I think you have hit the nail on the head here of what women really, really want most. Someone they can count on and trust to be there - no matter what, come what may. Elaine is a lucky lady.
Please send her my birthday wishes and hopes for many, many more!
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I cannot bring you dawn's new light,
but I'll be there through lonely nights.
Roy,
When you set aside all that mostly unimportant romantic stuff and get down to the absolute brass tacks of a relationship, I think you have hit the nail on the head here of what women really, really want most. Someone they can count on and trust to be there - no matter what, come what may. Elaine is a lucky lady.
Please send her my birthday wishes and hopes for many, many more!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Robyn, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from aryr
Oh, please wish Elaine a Happy Birthday and a prayer of peace from me, Roy. I loved this quatern, it showed the depth of your love for her. Your words never promised silly things that couldn't be obtained but you did promise in the last stanza of loving and being faithful in dawn's new light. Very well done, very much enjoyed and I loved the artwork. Blessings.
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Oh, please wish Elaine a Happy Birthday and a prayer of peace from me, Roy. I loved this quatern, it showed the depth of your love for her. Your words never promised silly things that couldn't be obtained but you did promise in the last stanza of loving and being faithful in dawn's new light. Very well done, very much enjoyed and I loved the artwork. Blessings.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are so very welcome, Roy, blessings.
Comment from Sherry Asbury
Happiest Birthday, Elaine!!! You already have the greatest gift of all...a decent and loving man who writes with the strings of his heart. May your day be filled with joy and happiness, and most of all - peace!!
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Happiest Birthday, Elaine!!! You already have the greatest gift of all...a decent and loving man who writes with the strings of his heart. May your day be filled with joy and happiness, and most of all - peace!!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Sherry, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
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You are so welcome and I wish you blessings and oceans of love.
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You too
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It's a lovely birthday, love poem for your cherished mate, Elaine. I'm sure she is happy and content with whatever you can give her. Happy Birthday, Elaine. Have a wonderful day! Nancy:)
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It's a lovely birthday, love poem for your cherished mate, Elaine. I'm sure she is happy and content with whatever you can give her. Happy Birthday, Elaine. Have a wonderful day! Nancy:)
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Nancy, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute with us. Elaine's a lucky lady. I am sure she will cherish this poem forever. The flow and the rhyming scheme were very good.
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Thank you for sharing this birthday tribute with us. Elaine's a lucky lady. I am sure she will cherish this poem forever. The flow and the rhyming scheme were very good.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Barbara, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This exceptional poem gets my last 6 for the week! It is skillfully and beautifully written--focusing expressively on what God can do, His unique power, and the enduring, sweet love and devotion of a husband!
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This exceptional poem gets my last 6 for the week! It is skillfully and beautifully written--focusing expressively on what God can do, His unique power, and the enduring, sweet love and devotion of a husband!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much Janice, for these marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy