Halloween Night
Spirits roam on...13 total reviews
Comment from Mama Baer
Wow! i just tried writing an etheree poem, too, but yours is fantastic! And that image!! So cool. What a clever idea, and every word (and syllable) is thoughtfully placed. Great work!
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Wow! i just tried writing an etheree poem, too, but yours is fantastic! And that image!! So cool. What a clever idea, and every word (and syllable) is thoughtfully placed. Great work!
Comment Written 27-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thank you so much for this exceptional review, I hope you and your family have a fun and safe Halloween 🎃
Comment from Word Junkie
Hello Author,
This is a good entry for the etheree contest. It holds together nicely and does a great job of describing the spookiness associated with Halloween. I know you did a lot of reworking lines and syllable counting on your fingers. Well done!
I wish you luck in the contest,
~Lana
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Hello Author,
This is a good entry for the etheree contest. It holds together nicely and does a great job of describing the spookiness associated with Halloween. I know you did a lot of reworking lines and syllable counting on your fingers. Well done!
I wish you luck in the contest,
~Lana
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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How did you know? Lol. Yes I did count but then put my poem into a sllyable counter...much easier and more accurate. Thanks so much for this great review. :)
Comment from Carlos' girl
Yes indeed the veil is thin on this day and indeed we may meet someone from the spirit realm. Good poem good solid rhymes and metre with very cool illustration. Keep up the good work; you are shining.
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Yes indeed the veil is thin on this day and indeed we may meet someone from the spirit realm. Good poem good solid rhymes and metre with very cool illustration. Keep up the good work; you are shining.
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Comment Written 26-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2021
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Thanks for this terrific review, it's always good to hear from you. :)
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Xoxo
