One-Liner
Entry25 total reviews
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your one-line poem is excellent--a succinct, wise statement about how we approach life. At some point we learn that not all "matters'' deserve our undivided attention and dedicated efforts. As you say, we must stick with those that at least make sense!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Your one-line poem is excellent--a succinct, wise statement about how we approach life. At some point we learn that not all "matters'' deserve our undivided attention and dedicated efforts. As you say, we must stick with those that at least make sense!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Terry Broxson
For one line and seven words, this is pretty dang good! I like the art work you choose to go with it. Good luck with the contest. I tried to think of another way to express this thought, but I think you nailed it. Good job.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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For one line and seven words, this is pretty dang good! I like the art work you choose to go with it. Good luck with the contest. I tried to think of another way to express this thought, but I think you nailed it. Good job.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Many thanks
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
Many things happen to us in our everyday struggle in life. Ultimately, what matters is does it really matter to you? Be cool. That's all matters! I enjoyed your one-liner poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Many things happen to us in our everyday struggle in life. Ultimately, what matters is does it really matter to you? Be cool. That's all matters! I enjoyed your one-liner poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Thanks?John
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A poignant write and sometimes what matters to some makes no sense at all but we always need to see the world from another's poignant of view to understand, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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A poignant write and sometimes what matters to some makes no sense at all but we always need to see the world from another's poignant of view to understand, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2021
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Thanks...John
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your contest entry is in good form. You make a great statement many need to hear and follow. I'm applying it to the state of the mess the world is in.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Your contest entry is in good form. You make a great statement many need to hear and follow. I'm applying it to the state of the mess the world is in.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I love the artwork, John,
and the presentation is good.
-You wrote a good monostitch
with a good topic.
-I wonder how many times,
in the course of a day or week,
that matters really make sense.
-It would be interesting to know.
-You have a good message and
something to think about.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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-I love the artwork, John,
and the presentation is good.
-You wrote a good monostitch
with a good topic.
-I wonder how many times,
in the course of a day or week,
that matters really make sense.
-It would be interesting to know.
-You have a good message and
something to think about.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John
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You are very welcome, John.
Comment from Mary Vigasin
Trying to write a one line poem that matters and makes sense is truly a difficult task. You truly nailed it and actually wrote a one line poem.
Smart and clever.
Regards
Mary
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Trying to write a one line poem that matters and makes sense is truly a difficult task. You truly nailed it and actually wrote a one line poem.
Smart and clever.
Regards
Mary
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John
Comment from royowen
I'm afraid all matters that make sense, aren't necessarily the only ones that matter, because we can only move within the lens our own understanding, wisdom and knowledge, it is truly foolish to dismiss those things that aren't comprehensible...unless of course, we believe ourselves to be God. Thank you, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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I'm afraid all matters that make sense, aren't necessarily the only ones that matter, because we can only move within the lens our own understanding, wisdom and knowledge, it is truly foolish to dismiss those things that aren't comprehensible...unless of course, we believe ourselves to be God. Thank you, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John
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Pleasure
Comment from Sherry Asbury
You have made a fine point here! So many matters never flatter or glitter or flutter toward the core of need. I love your artwork. Seshadri always offers something unique and this art is a tangle. Reminds me of Congress.
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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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You have made a fine point here! So many matters never flatter or glitter or flutter toward the core of need. I love your artwork. Seshadri always offers something unique and this art is a tangle. Reminds me of Congress.
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Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John
Comment from Mark D. R.
Very true!
In just a few words, you did capture what matters. Like the illustration that your paired with your few words (and mini m-letter alliteration) for this contest entry. While the artwork has red, I would prefer black text. IMHO it makes it more dramatic. (Consider black background color and white text?)
Mark
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Very true!
In just a few words, you did capture what matters. Like the illustration that your paired with your few words (and mini m-letter alliteration) for this contest entry. While the artwork has red, I would prefer black text. IMHO it makes it more dramatic. (Consider black background color and white text?)
Mark
Comment Written 24-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2021
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Thank you much for the review...John