Murder at the Melodrama
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Melodrama Murder, Act 1, S2b"Comedy-mystery set at rehearsals for melodrama.
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Comment from barbara.wilkey
The plot just gets better and better. I like this story.
(Let's begin with where we left off last night. Madge, and Marty are onstage, and Barry is peering at them through a window. Places, everyone. (You don't need the '(' at the beginning.)
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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The plot just gets better and better. I like this story.
(Let's begin with where we left off last night. Madge, and Marty are onstage, and Barry is peering at them through a window. Places, everyone. (You don't need the '(' at the beginning.)
Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. I'm so glad you're enjoying. It's taking me a while because I get involved in writing other things. judi
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Dialog is excellent--witty touch--dark and stormy night--put a lid on it.
I am confused as to why the letter would be incriminating.
someone who knew the area well, someone who just [blend=>BLENDED] in
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reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Dialog is excellent--witty touch--dark and stormy night--put a lid on it.
I am confused as to why the letter would be incriminating.
someone who knew the area well, someone who just [blend=>BLENDED] in
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 15-Oct-2021
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Thanks so much for your review and comments. Maybe I should have clarified that. In earlier scenes it was mentioned that Patterson's papers had been stolen from the guest cottage and this must have been part of them. Also, Lou is kind of Barney Fife character, always quick to make assumptions. judi
