Duck For Cover
An earthquake is coming16 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a cute pun and a nice picture to accompany it. I tried to come up with something for this contest but couldn't seem to manage it. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a cute pun and a nice picture to accompany it. I tried to come up with something for this contest but couldn't seem to manage it. Good luck in the contest.
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Thanks.
Comment from Terry Broxson
You got a good for the contest. I think you meet the requirements and it did make me smile, but in truth I think the expression on the duck's face contributed to the humor along with the words you gave him/her. Good Job, good luck with the contest.
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You got a good for the contest. I think you meet the requirements and it did make me smile, but in truth I think the expression on the duck's face contributed to the humor along with the words you gave him/her. Good Job, good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from royowen
Hah hah hah. I love the clever play on words, (I've seen one or two this morning) these very clever things are very important in developing these short poems. An excellent work, good luck, blessings Roy
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Hah hah hah. I love the clever play on words, (I've seen one or two this morning) these very clever things are very important in developing these short poems. An excellent work, good luck, blessings Roy
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Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and
a very good play on
words with "duck!"
-A clever entry; I liked it.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Oct-2021
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-Very nice image and
presentation.
-The syllable count is good,
along with the topic.
-Effective imagery and
a very good play on
words with "duck!"
-A clever entry; I liked it.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Witty, Animal 5-7-5 writing prompt entry speaks it was no natural time since there was an earthquake likely so it was time for covering the ducks; Well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review; God Bless you, my dear writer, ALCREATOR October Festive Month
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This Witty, Animal 5-7-5 writing prompt entry speaks it was no natural time since there was an earthquake likely so it was time for covering the ducks; Well said, well done; thank you for this, happy to review; God Bless you, my dear writer, ALCREATOR October Festive Month
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like the double meaning of "duck" in this poem. Duck for cover with a real duck in the picture. It's funny as well as clever. The syllable count is correct.
Well done and good luck.
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I like the double meaning of "duck" in this poem. Duck for cover with a real duck in the picture. It's funny as well as clever. The syllable count is correct.
Well done and good luck.
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Comment Written 13-Oct-2021
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