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Unfortunately, Yours....

Maybelline Green and Her Pets

28 total reviews 
Comment from Cindy Warren
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That's cute. I want to get a little dog when I retire. I just hope Madame Cat is not too upset. I expect he'll chew up a few shoes and pillows, but he'll be mine for life, because I'd never abandon him.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the fun review and generous compliments. So glad you like. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
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What an adorable tale, or is it tail?
A very fun read, Sally. Your lighthearted style made it uplifting and left me with a smile.
Poor Sir Cat...
Gotta love that last part about the puppies.

Very cute and well written.

Take care,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you for the superb review and generous stars, dear Rhonda. I am very blessed by your kindness. Blessings always, Sally xoxo
Comment from Robert Zimmerman
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Hello Sally.

The story is written in a clever way using fortunately and unfortunately in alternate paragraphs. You counter every fortunate with an unfortunate incident and that's creative.

Good luck in the contest.

PAL Z



 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments. It is so appreciated. Sending you my best today as always,
    Sal your pal
reply by Robert Zimmerman on 31-Oct-2021
    You're very welcome Sal.

    PAL Z
Comment from damommy
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How funny. Especially when talking about the pillow, not Sir Cat. I, too, have had pets for as long as I can remember. I've had dogs and cats who were great friends, a turtle who adored the cats, a parakeet, a duck, rabbits, and so on. I remember when I was about four, my grandmother and I started a worm farm. I cannot imagine a life without pets.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and generous compliments, dear Yvonne. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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Fortunately (!!), your story is well-written, entertaining, and amusing. You have tied the points together well with the two key words assigned. I especially like the end--very creative.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the super kind review, dear Janice. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs...
Comment from Shirley McLain
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I am also animal lover. I have a total of 9 animals, 2 cats and 7 dogs. Out of the nine, seven are rescued. I won't be without any of them until I'm forced into it. You did a great job, and I saw no errors. have a wonderful night. Shirley

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Wow! You are an animal lover. God bless you! I'm glad you enjoyed this. Sending you my best today and many thanks,
    Sal XOs
Comment from Halfree
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Just looking around and saw your posting ... read it and enjoyed it ...had a few chuckles Some good writing in this posting A good read for me ... read the thing 3 times and enjoyed all three reads,.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you for the super kind review and compliments. Both are so appreciated. Blessings always,
    Sally :))
Comment from Boogienights
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This is a funny and creative entry for the contest. I feel so bad for Sir Cat, but what are you going to do? I love this, I think it will do well in the contest. Best of luck to you. :)

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Aw, you are so sweet! Thank you so much! I'm so very blessed. This is about as silly as it gets. I had fun with it.
    Sending you and yours my very best,
    Sal xoxo's
Comment from royowen
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Yes indeed, I can tell share with you some hair raising stories about pet ownership, from being very young, (or is that fur raising) just love this most wonderful entry in this contest Sally, blessings and good luck, Roy
Footnote : could you please pray for Gert Sherwood,'s hubby Stan whose had a stroke, and Sherry Astbury whose been diagnosed with cancer. Bless you.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 31-Oct-2021
    Thank you, Roy. I really appreciate the update and kind review. My sister, Suzy, is losing her husband to cancer. Jackson and I are traveling to Georgia this week to say goodbye. Blessings,
    Sal XOs...
reply by royowen on 31-Oct-2021
    I?m so sorry Sally, I mentioned a small prayer
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Haha when you put two different species vying for one's attention, things are bound to happen, Sally. It seems the cat and dog tried to antagonize one another on purpose. Your contest entry was fun to read and review. I like the 'back and forth' of the antics of the kitty and the puppy.
Best wishes in the contest.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2021


reply by the author on 02-Nov-2021
    Thank you for the lovely review and kind words, dear Jan. Blessings always,
    Sal XOs...