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It was a good thing her audiobook wasn't working...
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Comment from
lyenochka
Lol! Ooops! Well, I'm impressed she could sense someone sneaking up on her from behind and that she had all those martial arts skills. Now why wouldn't her father just call her name first? I guess he will in the future!
Best wishes in the contest!
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
Thanks so much! My dad used to sneak up on me on occasion, although I was never quite as lethal as our gal here. . :)
Blessings!
Deb
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Giftedone.Eric Wallace .
I enjoyed to read it was brilliant to me it was very well worth it it caught me from the start all the way to the end captivating all the way thank you for sharing gifted you are
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Comment Written 08-Oct-2021
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021
How kind of you! I"m pleased that it grabbed your attention and that you enjoyed it so much.
Blessings,
Deb
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