Comment from Mary Vigasin

Excellent

A beautifully written prayer so deeply personal yet has words that we all can offer in prayer.
One special line that your pen be a stream of grace and light. Your words are always an inspiration and want us to shine in His light.
Blessings
Mary

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Mary, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

Comment from Janet Foor

Exceptional

What a joy to read your words in the form of a prayer. Your wisdom and love of the Lord always shine through each line.
Thank you for sharing.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Janet, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

Comment from Goodadvicechan

Exceptional

Your poem rhymes well. You a good job outlining what having faith in God can bring to you.

I like what you said:

"He saved me from death's dark despair."
"He gave me hope when all seemed lost."

Hope is what everybody needs daily.
Thanks for sharing your poem.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

Comment from papa55mike

Exceptional

Hi, Roy. I've always said that God's love is the most powerful force in the universe. It's our faith in that love that gives us the hope to do amazing things. What a wonderfully written prayer poem. Best of luck with your writing!

Have a great day and God bless.
mike

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Mike, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

Comment from Jasmine Girl

Excellent

What a beautiful prayer you wrote. I like the similes like "Golden River" and the rhyming scheme.

You should read this poem in our church. It is a great prayer.

Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Lisa, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan

Excellent

There comes a time in our lives when darkness surrounds us and lures us to gloomy thoughts. Things feel too desolate; hope seems to be lost somewhere far away from our reach. In such dark times, what gives us motivation is the power of God. He inspires us with his teachings. A remarkable poem you have penned . Inspiring. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Seshardri, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi Roy
I am so glad you found your God because you write such lovely poetry and your commitment to him is always seen in your rhyme and meter
A wordsmith of the highest order
As always Cheers Chrisx

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks Chris, for these amazing comments and a super review,, blessings Roy

reply by Chrissy710 on 09-Oct-2021

Thumbs up Roy

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Bless you

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice artwork
and presentation, Roy.
-You wrote a very good prayer
beginng with the river and stream
comparison. I particularly like
"may a golden river flow."
-You show how your life
was changed by following
His path and end with a
very good concluding verse
taking us back to the stream.
-Well done.

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much Pam, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Oct-2021

You are very welcome, Roy.

reply by Pam (respa) on 09-Oct-2021

You are very welcome, Roy, and Happy Birthday!!!!

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thank you Pam

reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thank you

reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Oct-2021

You're welcome.

Comment from Cogitator

Excellent

If we all came to the conclusion that prayer is simply talking to our inner self, we would have a better perspective as to where our consciousness meets up with the ultimate consciousness. Great effort...John

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 09-Oct-2021

Thanks so much John, for these fantastic comments and a great review,, blessings Roy

Comment from Mama Baer

Excellent

This is a beautiful prayer, Roy. You have such a lovely way of describing the very thing you say is impossible to describe. When I read your words, I feel God's love emanating from them. Thank you for sharing with us!

 Comment Written 08-Oct-2021

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reply by the author on 08-Oct-2021

Thanks so much for these lovely comments and a great review, blessings Roy