Comment from karenina

Excellent

Clever loop poem...not easy to pull off effectively in an eight word poem. The duality of definitions for senses and matter really played well against one another!

Karenina

 Comment Written 05-Oct-2021

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Karenina

Comment from writer723

Excellent

Excellent job on this poem. I like how your expressions lead back into one another. You've utilized a very clever device by using each word to tie into similar yet unique ideas. Senses and matter blend well together in your depiction. You're very talented and you express yourself quite well.

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2021

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Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

This is a very clever write... the overall presentation is very pretty... colors are great and the poem is... good job... good luck in your contest... looking forward to more... yours, diana

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2021

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Comment from amahra

Excellent

I really like your 8 words or less contest entry. It is very cleverly written and thought-out. The artwork is stunning with a very exotic woman posing. This is a great entry.

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Comment from dragonpoet

Exceptional

This short poem uses repetition well to show how All thins in life intertwine.
I like the artwork.
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Joan

 Comment Written 04-Oct-2021

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No problem, John.
Joan

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

I wish I had a six left. This is really creative. You've used two words three times and joined them with two extras. And each line those main two words, sense matter, say something so different. I think this is pure genius. Well done and good luck in the contest. :)) Sandra xx

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Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

Is it an image expressing sense of wonder or is it an image of senseless matter. No matter what, it is a picture of a gorgeous princess. The words that you wrote make perfect sense.

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Comment from Sherry Asbury

Excellent

What a gorgeous jumble of words! There is a duality in your poem that seeps into the reader's mind slowly - you chose a picture that is sensual and sensational. Very nice work here.

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Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

Oh, this is most engaging. You put volumes in these 8 lines and presented a very sensual, expressive picture.

Great imagery, visuals and a stunning presentation. Good luck in the contest.

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Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

Another creative, thought provoking poem from you friend. Of course the accompanying artwork stirred the senses and mattered to my eyes, which lingered a bit longer than normal : ))

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