Hungry Eyes
Deadly love15 total reviews
Comment from Mary Shifman
This is a very creepy picture and a twist on the usual phrases. You have to wonder if the girl knows she's being gnawed on. This is well constructed and the imagery is ... delicious. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
This is a very creepy picture and a twist on the usual phrases. You have to wonder if the girl knows she's being gnawed on. This is well constructed and the imagery is ... delicious. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this great review, its very appreciated. :)
Comment from LisaMay
Being fond of word play myself, i appreciated how you'd used a couple of twists on the usual to create this clever poem. Bloody marvellous - I hope your entry does well.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
Being fond of word play myself, i appreciated how you'd used a couple of twists on the usual to create this clever poem. Bloody marvellous - I hope your entry does well.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Thank you for this encouraging review, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
Excellent! Love the artwork pairing! Its so cute, funny, and a just creepy enough. Worderful job. I believe you have a winner on your hands! Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
Excellent! Love the artwork pairing! Its so cute, funny, and a just creepy enough. Worderful job. I believe you have a winner on your hands! Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Wow! Thank you so much for the six stars. Happy upcoming Halloween. :)
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This is a very good portrayal of what might happen with the 'Walking Dead'. Your play on words conjures much imagery and brings to mind
the question, "How long will it take to reach her heart."
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
This is a very good portrayal of what might happen with the 'Walking Dead'. Your play on words conjures much imagery and brings to mind
the question, "How long will it take to reach her heart."
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Not long is my guess! :). Thanks so much for this great review.
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Good imagination!
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Good imagination!
Comment from SHABAMO
Good entry into this contest and a good choice of artwork as well. Glad we don't live ins world where this is a real thing, except maybe in Florida.
Your syllable count was on point.
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reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
Good entry into this contest and a good choice of artwork as well. Glad we don't live ins world where this is a real thing, except maybe in Florida.
Your syllable count was on point.
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Comment Written 25-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2021
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Hahaha....I just came back from Florida! Didn't see any zombies though..:) Thanks so much for this great review.