Comment from pookietoo

Excellent

I love reading all of your poems, Roy. You do a wonderful job rhyming in your poems. How long have you been writing poems, they are great! Keep smiling.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

reply by pookietoo on 28-Sep-2021

Welcome.

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This was superb - it was romantic, spiritual, thought-pondering, soul-searching and much more. Excellent rhyming and meter throughout, which is a signature style for you.''

Thank you for the author notes and the scriptural reference.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from lyenochka

Exceptional

Thank you for this deep spiritual reflection, Roy! I especially liked the stereophonic effect of the "wandering wail" to symbolize the spiritual journey. My favorite part was the last two stanzas which show resolve to serve the Lord instead of man's "futile dreams" and "endless schemes."

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Helen, for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your spiritual poem reads well, Roy. The presentation is great--the color scheme, the image, the smooth flow of lines, the end rhymes, the author notes, and your great and true message. I believe what you are saying that man has a choice and many times that choice is in opposition to God's way. When man allows God to lead, then life will be better for him and others. The road may be rocky, but in the end, true believers will be saved.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Jan, for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Zhen Xuan Liu

Excellent

I love this poem!!!! It rhymes perfectly and I can really picture your thoughts. Nice vocabularies you put into this poem (rove, gales, grove, etc). Keep up the amazing work and I am excited to read more your poems!

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Yardier

Exceptional

God's hand guides your meter
Blessed with Grace and Mercy
You share the Gospel
With words on an arrow
They pierce the heart.

Thank you for sharing and caring.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much for these fantastic remakes, review and stars, blessings Roy

Comment from Patty Palmer

Excellent

Another beautiful poem about our Lord and how He loves us. He forgives our sins and tresspasses. He's always there when we need him. We are never alone. Great job, Roy!
Blessings!
Patty

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Patty, for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Another fine one, Roy. And I loved the artwork. I really loved the poem and below I've picked lines that meant something to me.

to understand why I'm blood-bought

One may as well chase endless schemes,
where death in silent darkness beams

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Amahra,for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from BethShelby

Excellent

Beatifully written and true of the way the mind sometime wonders trying to piece out how God came to care so much about us that he would go to such lengths to assure of a future in his kingdom. I really enjoy your poetry.

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thanks so much Beth for this marvellous comments and a great review, blessings Roy

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

Your lovely poem was followed by some very remarkable author's notes, Roy. You make more sense than some so called preachers who really don't understand the meaning of God's love. I think I'd rather listen to you and hear your thoughts than many others. I really enjoyed the lesson in this poem, my friend. You are a natural preacher of God's Holy Word. Love and hugs, Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 26-Sep-2021

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reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Thank you Yvonne your compliments are most uplifting, I think all folk genuinely want to believe they have hope, not hear they?re sinners, they know that, thank you for a gracious review, blessings Roy

reply by Sandra Stoner-Mitchell on 28-Sep-2021

You're most welcome, dear Roy. You got my name muddled with another of my good friends! Lol. Love and hugs, dear friend. xx

reply by the author on 28-Sep-2021

Sorry Sandra, you are unique