The Life of a homeless person
The homeless came to mind immediately12 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Person,
Yeah, I can see that. It's a shame that you should feel guilty for being a normal, successful, average person. That's not on you. Hard times come to everyone and we all handle them differently. But this piece does show that you have a kind heart. That's awesome. Thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Dear Mystery Person,
Yeah, I can see that. It's a shame that you should feel guilty for being a normal, successful, average person. That's not on you. Hard times come to everyone and we all handle them differently. But this piece does show that you have a kind heart. That's awesome. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you for the review, I appreciate your perspective
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Thank you for the review, I appreciate your perspective
Comment from AliMom
I positively love, love, love your final line, "Dirty guilt fills my heart as I think of the disparity. It is so poignant and filled with truth. I'm not sure if this is more the life of the indigent or the passerby. Still, it is descriptive and provocative. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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I positively love, love, love your final line, "Dirty guilt fills my heart as I think of the disparity. It is so poignant and filled with truth. I'm not sure if this is more the life of the indigent or the passerby. Still, it is descriptive and provocative. Best wishes in the contest.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2021
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Thank you very much for the positive review. I'm new to this so positive kind words are very appreciated
