Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 42"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from Ric Myworld
I was glad to finally see your post pop up, since I'd been a little worried after it wasn't up by noon. LOL. Yes, I'm a worry wart sometimes. I hadn't realized what a worrisome little nit Cynthia would be come, but with you, we just never know. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I was glad to finally see your post pop up, since I'd been a little worried after it wasn't up by noon. LOL. Yes, I'm a worry wart sometimes. I hadn't realized what a worrisome little nit Cynthia would be come, but with you, we just never know. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I am sorry I worried you and flattered that I did. LOL Life got the best of me and I was 158 reviews, 46 messages and a lot of thanks for sixes behind. Congratulations on winning Story of the Month! It deserved the win and I think so highly of the author.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Bam! You don't miss a beat. Great chapter!
his mind was a vice=>VISE.
and could ruin [sugg OMIT any of] our chances of getting the gold."
"You just [lay=>LIE] here (unless you intend her to misspeak)
warm sun had [eased [SUGG OMIT some of] her nerves.
"Are you looking for the FB=>FBI agent?"
"Do you think they expect=>SUSPECT anything?"
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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Bam! You don't miss a beat. Great chapter!
his mind was a vice=>VISE.
and could ruin [sugg OMIT any of] our chances of getting the gold."
"You just [lay=>LIE] here (unless you intend her to misspeak)
warm sun had [eased [SUGG OMIT some of] her nerves.
"Are you looking for the FB=>FBI agent?"
"Do you think they expect=>SUSPECT anything?"
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 12-Sep-2021
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I just got around to making all the changes so this one I held onto to make sure I didn't forget your suggestions. Thank you for your time and assistance in smoothing out the storyline.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I hope one of the agents are still with Faith, the last thing anyone would want is a visit from Cynthia. But, if he does go, Mary will see him! That would be really interesting. Oh, this story is so good, you have me leaping all over the place. Now let's get back and see what's happening with Liz!! I don't think Michael wants to play his aunts game anymore, and now she's mentioned him to Mason, his life is almost sure to be terminated sooner rather than later. Well done, my clever friend, another fabulous chapter. Hugs and love, Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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I hope one of the agents are still with Faith, the last thing anyone would want is a visit from Cynthia. But, if he does go, Mary will see him! That would be really interesting. Oh, this story is so good, you have me leaping all over the place. Now let's get back and see what's happening with Liz!! I don't think Michael wants to play his aunts game anymore, and now she's mentioned him to Mason, his life is almost sure to be terminated sooner rather than later. Well done, my clever friend, another fabulous chapter. Hugs and love, Sandra xxx
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thanks for enjoying and catching all the ins and outs of the story. I never know if I come across and provide all the necessary since INFORMATION since I am told I carry a lot of the story in my head and forget to tell the reader. Smiles!!!
Comment from royowen
Michael isn't as devious as Cynthia first thought, but at this stage, she'll be in danger from Mason if she doesn't watch out. Interesting how crooks think, they become desperate when the sniff danger, because Mason knows people aren't as evil as he is. Beautifully written, Carol, blessings Roy
Typo : The more resistance they (would) find...2: Do you think they (expect) anything. Suspect?
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Michael isn't as devious as Cynthia first thought, but at this stage, she'll be in danger from Mason if she doesn't watch out. Interesting how crooks think, they become desperate when the sniff danger, because Mason knows people aren't as evil as he is. Beautifully written, Carol, blessings Roy
Typo : The more resistance they (would) find...2: Do you think they (expect) anything. Suspect?
Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
It's interesting that Cynthia thinks she's an equal partner to Mason! She is just as devious though. I'm sure there will be people waiting for them at the cottage, or maybe Poppa is waiting for them to leave the church? You've created a lot of questions, Carol. Great chapter.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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It's interesting that Cynthia thinks she's an equal partner to Mason! She is just as devious though. I'm sure there will be people waiting for them at the cottage, or maybe Poppa is waiting for them to leave the church? You've created a lot of questions, Carol. Great chapter.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Sorry for the cut and paste but I am now currently 158 responses behind. I want to make the changes, thank everyone and start fresh. Wishing you a great day.
Please forgive me for being so far behind on answering reviews, fixing suggestions, and thanking everyone for their kindness. Good thing a birthday only comes once a year. I posted to my family that I was cooking and for the first time in years, my house was over flowing for two days after two days of cooking. Now in three days, Matthew starts filming again and I must cook for them. This woman is tired. Thank you for all your support and kindness.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is exactly what Mary needs to see Jon. That will fit in perfect with everything that just happened. I hope Michael realized his aunt is an evil woman. I think everything will soon crash down around her. I liked reading this.
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reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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This is exactly what Mary needs to see Jon. That will fit in perfect with everything that just happened. I hope Michael realized his aunt is an evil woman. I think everything will soon crash down around her. I liked reading this.
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Comment Written 02-Sep-2021
reply by the author on 06-Sep-2021
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Thanks Barbara...I am struggling to get caught up and I know by now you've learned a bit more about what's happening. Today I will try to write the confrontation between Mary and Jon, but I couldn't keep writing and not thank everyone and a few I simply couldn't just ignore. Smiles, Carol