Secrets in the Wind
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Comment from Judy Lawless
So much emotional drama in many of today's posts, and this is definitely one of them, Carol. You've done a fantastic job of conveying it. What a horrible situation for Cassidy to be in.
One little spag: "as if she'd seen them for the very(first) time.
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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So much emotional drama in many of today's posts, and this is definitely one of them, Carol. You've done a fantastic job of conveying it. What a horrible situation for Cassidy to be in.
One little spag: "as if she'd seen them for the very(first) time.
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Hello, Judy....
I've been so excited yet a bit afraid to be able to get to this part of the story. I wanted to make sure I got all the emotions out there and I didn't let the story fall flat. I felt for Cassidy because she'd been a young girl forced to do something she really hadn't wanted to do and now 30 years later it was at her doorstep. On the other hand, Mary has so much compounded...Faith, see Cassidy, finding Jon is alive and there's always Liz. Your review gives me chills that I did the story right!!! Thank you so very much. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
Wow, I was waiting for this one but never realized just how real it would seem, and Cassidy still hasn't revealed the whole truth. Thanks for another outstanding chapter. Thanks for sharing. :-)
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Wow, I was waiting for this one but never realized just how real it would seem, and Cassidy still hasn't revealed the whole truth. Thanks for another outstanding chapter. Thanks for sharing. :-)
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Yes, the emotions in this one at 5 this morning wrapped around me and played tug of war. I am thrilled that it came across the way I had hoped. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Hope you are well and enjoying your weekend.
Comment from Carol Clark2
Oh, you always stop your chapters at the best times to make us want to read more! Great conversation here. Can't wait to read the next part, and I see you've posted another segment already. You've been busy! Good writing, as usual. Blessings. Carol
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Oh, you always stop your chapters at the best times to make us want to read more! Great conversation here. Can't wait to read the next part, and I see you've posted another segment already. You've been busy! Good writing, as usual. Blessings. Carol
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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Thank you Carol...this chapter and the next had to be posted together. I was going off the deep end wanting to bring it to a point. i hope it came across as I planned.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
NO!!! DON'T STOP HERE!! We have to see how Cassidy tells the truth and how Mary will respond, and then how is Liz going to find out and how will she respond. This is too much. We aren't even talking about Annie and Mason. Oh My!!! Love the story.
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NO!!! DON'T STOP HERE!! We have to see how Cassidy tells the truth and how Mary will respond, and then how is Liz going to find out and how will she respond. This is too much. We aren't even talking about Annie and Mason. Oh My!!! Love the story.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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I hope you feel I came across with enough emotions in these two chapters. That was my fear. I know it's a lot of dialogue, but it was the only way I knew to convey how things had affected them.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
As soon as I read your review and saw you had posted, I dashed over to read them! Oh, she's going to tell her about Jon, that is going to be a heck of a shock, Carol! Then she'll find out about Liz... Crikey! The poor woman is going to die of shock!! I have to go and read the next part. Loving this!! :)) Sandra xxxx Ps, you've done it again, dropped my 'favourite' love to hate character in the wrong place....
dad--" [Cynthia] dropped her head .... Cassidy dropped her head...
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As soon as I read your review and saw you had posted, I dashed over to read them! Oh, she's going to tell her about Jon, that is going to be a heck of a shock, Carol! Then she'll find out about Liz... Crikey! The poor woman is going to die of shock!! I have to go and read the next part. Loving this!! :)) Sandra xxxx Ps, you've done it again, dropped my 'favourite' love to hate character in the wrong place....
dad--" [Cynthia] dropped her head .... Cassidy dropped her head...
Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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I was bubbling over with excitement to see how you would react. I knew I had to post both chapters together and it really needs the third. (I fixed Cynthia...she's always hanging around in my head..guess she doesn't want to be forgotten. LOL) I hope I wrote Mary's reaction as you expected. Waiting impatiently of course!
Love ya, Carol
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My heart hasn't stopped clanging on like a steem engine! What a great couple of chapters. I'm going to try and calm down now. Cuppa tea, that'll do it! Next!!!
Comment from BethShelby
This is very emotional reunion and it was especially hard on Cassady who doesn't know how to tell Mary about Jon. I dying to know more and I see you have another post so I'll read it and hope it answers more questions.
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This is very emotional reunion and it was especially hard on Cassady who doesn't know how to tell Mary about Jon. I dying to know more and I see you have another post so I'll read it and hope it answers more questions.
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Comment Written 29-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 29-Aug-2021
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I am glad you can continue reading today and find a few answers but unfortunately not all. I hope you felt all the emotions involved.
Smiles and hugs, Carol