Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 35 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 35"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from ShirleyT1
My eyes were glued to the computer as I read this chapter. From beginning to end, you made this story come to life in my mind. I was right there with them. I love the sincere prayer of Mary!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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My eyes were glued to the computer as I read this chapter. From beginning to end, you made this story come to life in my mind. I was right there with them. I love the sincere prayer of Mary!
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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What an awesome review to receive about one's story. You put a huge smile on my face. Thank you so very much. I am thrilled that you enjoy the story. I liked the warm touch of Mary's prayer as well.
Smiles, Carol
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
This chapter goes to prove that dog is still a man's/ woman's best friend. Atta boy, Sebastian! Extra bone for you to chew and contemplate on the next rescue mission. Good that you safely rescued Mary and took them to Tango and Poppa. Looks like everyone is in need of everyone's help. Who is going to be the saviour?
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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This chapter goes to prove that dog is still a man's/ woman's best friend. Atta boy, Sebastian! Extra bone for you to chew and contemplate on the next rescue mission. Good that you safely rescued Mary and took them to Tango and Poppa. Looks like everyone is in need of everyone's help. Who is going to be the saviour?
Comment Written 27-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Wendy G
Dogs are so amazing. And intuitive re who to trust and who to help. So many difficult situations in this chapter. Mary, Faith Annie and Michael all need help and very quickly!! Especially Annie! Can't wait for the next chapter. Every time I think the goodies will surely solve things soon, something worse happens. Great writing Carol. You leave us on the edge of our chairs every time.
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Dogs are so amazing. And intuitive re who to trust and who to help. So many difficult situations in this chapter. Mary, Faith Annie and Michael all need help and very quickly!! Especially Annie! Can't wait for the next chapter. Every time I think the goodies will surely solve things soon, something worse happens. Great writing Carol. You leave us on the edge of our chairs every time.
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Yes Sebastian is a champion. Are you up very early today? Writing your next chapter??
I don?t know how you can fit it all in. A chapter a day plus poems and other pieces. Your brain must work at the speed of light!!
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I get up about 4:30 or 5 every morning. I keep getting kicked off the internet by storms and country living once it gets busy. I had a rough private message the other day, and I guess my salvation is to write, write, write until I get past the insecurities. Guess I am too thin-skinned at times. LOL, I am lucky because, at times, the storyline just flows, and I can't keep up with my thoughts. Glad you enjoy it!
Sleep tight! Good night!
Love, Carol
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You should never feel insecure about your writing - if is always excellent. Always.
I had a low rating today by a new person who wrote about my ?manor? of writing, and didn?t seem to even understand what I was saying in what I thought was very basic unpoetic English (?Decisions?). Don?t get discouraged by the odd one. Sometimes people feel they are being helpful by picking at everything. You write very well! Always.
Well now I?m off to bed. Looking forward to your next chapter. And I?d better not hold you up. Lots of people will be waiting!!
Wendy
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LOL...sweet dreams and a relaxing rest. Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
When can I stop holding my breath, Carol? Lol This is fantastic writing, but I'll need a very happy ending when it comes.ð??? For now I'll keep my fingers crossed for all of these broken women.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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When can I stop holding my breath, Carol? Lol This is fantastic writing, but I'll need a very happy ending when it comes.ð??? For now I'll keep my fingers crossed for all of these broken women.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for Sebastian - what a good dog! He even cared about a human he only met once. I liked this busy chapter but it was a little confusing with so many commands being barked out in such a sequence. Glad someone will guard Faith. Hope they find Annie soon. But they probably have some suspects in mind.
You have two different spellings for the dog's name:
"As Sebastian and Mary" and "Sebastion doubled back to Mary's"
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hooray for Sebastian - what a good dog! He even cared about a human he only met once. I liked this busy chapter but it was a little confusing with so many commands being barked out in such a sequence. Glad someone will guard Faith. Hope they find Annie soon. But they probably have some suspects in mind.
You have two different spellings for the dog's name:
"As Sebastian and Mary" and "Sebastion doubled back to Mary's"
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Ric Myworld
I hope you're having a wonderful day! It's been a pleasure reading two chapter today, but now I'm hoping they hurry up and find Annie. I'll be at the computer early in the morning for answers. :-) Smiles and a great big bear hug!
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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I hope you're having a wonderful day! It's been a pleasure reading two chapter today, but now I'm hoping they hurry up and find Annie. I'll be at the computer early in the morning for answers. :-) Smiles and a great big bear hug!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2021
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Don't be trying to butter me up.... I distinctly remember reading somewhere today that if you ever met me in person, I'd never shut up. LOL You'd be in for a big surprise! I am shy when I first meet someone...or around most of my family I don't say much. On the other hand, it does depend on the people I guess. I probably could get mouthy. LOL I'm working on it, but it might take a while to find Annie. She's been whisked away somewhere by someone. thanks for the bear hug...it was great! Smiles, Carol
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Knowing you're behind, I shouldn't be complicating the problem with a reply, but I have faith you'll catch up soon. I actually figure you for shy around strangers, which I am too. Believe it or not, and I'm sure you don't. LOL. But I would still bet that you and Liz together would be a hoot playing off each other. :-)
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As would you too! I love how you banter back and forth with me. Keeps one on their toes!
Smiles, Carol
Oh yeah, another chapter on it's way before the computer kicks me off.
Comment from BethShelby
Well at least the men with the brains are being brought up to date. You have a very exciting story going. You don't won't to loan out your muse do you? I'm thinking of fireing mine. She isn't that creative.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Well at least the men with the brains are being brought up to date. You have a very exciting story going. You don't won't to loan out your muse do you? I'm thinking of fireing mine. She isn't that creative.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
I beg you to bring Annie home safely in the next chapter--please don't torture her or your readers. Chilling to contemplate--glad the good guys are on it. Another great chapter!
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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I beg you to bring Annie home safely in the next chapter--please don't torture her or your readers. Chilling to contemplate--glad the good guys are on it. Another great chapter!
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
You're a darling! I really enjoyed this part. Well done to Sebastian!! What a clever boy. Now to find Annie. I wonder if Michael is suspicious of his aunt Cyn and Mason doing it. I'm thinking he is not like them at all, especially for what has been happening lately, the fire for one. Now to bring Faith and Mary up to the house and introduce them to Liz. YAY!! (I hope!!) Well done my friend, you should get a six for every part and I'm out. Love you lots. Sandra xxxx
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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You're a darling! I really enjoyed this part. Well done to Sebastian!! What a clever boy. Now to find Annie. I wonder if Michael is suspicious of his aunt Cyn and Mason doing it. I'm thinking he is not like them at all, especially for what has been happening lately, the fire for one. Now to bring Faith and Mary up to the house and introduce them to Liz. YAY!! (I hope!!) Well done my friend, you should get a six for every part and I'm out. Love you lots. Sandra xxxx
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
They will meet very soon. I hope it goes smoothly, but one never knows. And Mary needs to learn about Jon.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment from barbara.wilkey
You did a great job writing the action and the emotion. I was intently reading I didn't find and stray 'that's or 'down's. LOL I am sure there aren't any. I hope Michael shares all of his suspicions. He's got some that might help.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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You did a great job writing the action and the emotion. I was intently reading I didn't find and stray 'that's or 'down's. LOL I am sure there aren't any. I hope Michael shares all of his suspicions. He's got some that might help.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2021
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Hurrah for Sebastian and all the four=legged furbabies in the world. They share their love, their intelligence, and their support to everyone and ask little in return. Thanks for enjoying another chapter. Glad I could keep you guessing.
Smiles and hugs, Carol