Secrets in the Wind
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "Secrets in the Wind - Chap 29"A story of loss, deceit, murder and crime
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Comment from Patty Palmer
I'm still enjoying your story. I read the last chapter and wrote a review but my computer had a hiccup and I lost it so this is two in one. When the neighbor lady showed up with chocolate chip cookies, I don't trust her because she wants to buy the winery at all cost. So when she brought the cookies I was afraid they were poisoned. This was another great chapter! xxoo Patty
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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I'm still enjoying your story. I read the last chapter and wrote a review but my computer had a hiccup and I lost it so this is two in one. When the neighbor lady showed up with chocolate chip cookies, I don't trust her because she wants to buy the winery at all cost. So when she brought the cookies I was afraid they were poisoned. This was another great chapter! xxoo Patty
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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I can't seem to keep up with life in general, writing, reviewing and reading. I think Myrtle and Millie have me beat for sure. LOL
Thanks for the review and your kindness. Smiles, Carol
Comment from Judy Lawless
A lovely, romantic scene with Hank and Emmy, Carol. But then the rain begins and produces the shady characters. You've left Hank and Emmy sheltering in the woods, and brought Mason to the door at the winery? More trouble brewing. Well done.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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A lovely, romantic scene with Hank and Emmy, Carol. But then the rain begins and produces the shady characters. You've left Hank and Emmy sheltering in the woods, and brought Mason to the door at the winery? More trouble brewing. Well done.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol
Comment from ShirleyT1
This chapter is well written, and I sense a heightened pace just entered the story. I continue to enjoy the well-developed characters as the story progresses and gets more intense.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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This chapter is well written, and I sense a heightened pace just entered the story. I continue to enjoy the well-developed characters as the story progresses and gets more intense.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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thank you so much Shirley... Life is about to whip up a storm or maybe two again. Thanks for coming along for the ride. smiles, Carol
Comment from royowen
I wonder what brought Mason Caldwell to the Sweet Haven estates, and leaves with a convenient appearance of Miguel, I wonder what he's up to, I don't think he plays casual visits, perhaps he did have a flat tyre. Beautifully written friend Carol, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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I wonder what brought Mason Caldwell to the Sweet Haven estates, and leaves with a convenient appearance of Miguel, I wonder what he's up to, I don't think he plays casual visits, perhaps he did have a flat tyre. Beautifully written friend Carol, blessings Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol
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Of course you?re forgiven Carol, we all get that way
Comment from Seshadri_Sreenivasan
The story is getting complicated. I feel each character has some axe to grind, so to say. I enjoy reading your writing and how with ease you describe the scenery. The dialogue takes the story forward. Good going!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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The story is getting complicated. I feel each character has some axe to grind, so to say. I enjoy reading your writing and how with ease you describe the scenery. The dialogue takes the story forward. Good going!
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol
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Not to worry at all Carol. I enjoy reviewing your story.
Comment from Wendy G
Another interesting chapter, and an enjoyable read. I wish Liz was not being so hospitable to everyone! It will land her in trouble. the FBI protection is there for a reason. Looks like Mason C will have to return for his car - a pity he didn't carry a spare tyre with him! Thanks for another fine read.
Wendy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Another interesting chapter, and an enjoyable read. I wish Liz was not being so hospitable to everyone! It will land her in trouble. the FBI protection is there for a reason. Looks like Mason C will have to return for his car - a pity he didn't carry a spare tyre with him! Thanks for another fine read.
Wendy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol
Comment from Carol Clark2
Another great chapter in your book! I'm so enjoying reading this. 2 small suggestions: I'm always interested in buying properties, especially ones (no apostrophe). ...the golden sun painted the valley with its golden rays (eliminate one golden).
Wouldn't it raise suspicion if Miguel calls Mason "boss" in front of the others, since the window is still down? Maybe that will be addressed in your next chapter. I'll wait for that. Good writing, as usual. Blessings.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Another great chapter in your book! I'm so enjoying reading this. 2 small suggestions: I'm always interested in buying properties, especially ones (no apostrophe). ...the golden sun painted the valley with its golden rays (eliminate one golden).
Wouldn't it raise suspicion if Miguel calls Mason "boss" in front of the others, since the window is still down? Maybe that will be addressed in your next chapter. I'll wait for that. Good writing, as usual. Blessings.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol
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When you're feeling behind, you can skip responding to me. We can catch up later. Love & prayers.
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No! You are very important too! When yu take the time to read and review, I can find the time to say thank you. Might be short and sweet, but it will be appreciated. Smiles
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Thank you! I appreciate you!
Comment from lyenochka
Shouldn't someone be suspicious that Mason knew Miguel by name? It's good that Allie was there to intervene when he offered to buy the place. I liked how Hank and Emmy can mingle their time of affection and still talk work.
One comment about the "lush, green hills." California is euphemistically called the "golden state" for the brown hills. Even in Napa, the hills are brown most of the year. Have you been to Napa?
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Shouldn't someone be suspicious that Mason knew Miguel by name? It's good that Allie was there to intervene when he offered to buy the place. I liked how Hank and Emmy can mingle their time of affection and still talk work.
One comment about the "lush, green hills." California is euphemistically called the "golden state" for the brown hills. Even in Napa, the hills are brown most of the year. Have you been to Napa?
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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I have never been there but I researched it and every photo that I have found shows green everywhere in the hills, valleys, and vineyards. Now the pictures may be old and firest, drought and life might have moved in, but I much prefer the thought of green.
Smiles, Carol
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Everyone prefers green! Lol. If you see pictures of the Pacific NW, they show a sunny day and it's rarely sunny. Lol.
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LOL
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
The plot thickens! Chilling ending. I was hoping Cassidy would be there to confront Mason.
Sugg: include some details of the picnic lunch.
"Miguel, if you're going through town, would you mind if I hitched a ride? I've got a flat tire," Mason inquired.
SUGG:
"Miguel, if you're going through town, would you mind if I hitched a ride?" Mason asked. "I've got a flat tire."
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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The plot thickens! Chilling ending. I was hoping Cassidy would be there to confront Mason.
Sugg: include some details of the picnic lunch.
"Miguel, if you're going through town, would you mind if I hitched a ride? I've got a flat tire," Mason inquired.
SUGG:
"Miguel, if you're going through town, would you mind if I hitched a ride?" Mason asked. "I've got a flat tire."
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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fixed and I thank you!
It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol
Comment from Gert sherwood
Secrets in the Wind - Chap 29
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There are a couple of things I enjoy reading of your writing how with ease you describe the scenery and the dialogue is a pleasure to read and understand.
I will be waiting for your next chapter
Gert
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reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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Secrets in the Wind - Chap 29
Begin Again
There are a couple of things I enjoy reading of your writing how with ease you describe the scenery and the dialogue is a pleasure to read and understand.
I will be waiting for your next chapter
Gert
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2021
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2021
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It appears I am falling further and further behind, please forgive me. I appreciate the kindness of your review and am thrilled that you continue to enjoy it. Sending my thanks and a smile, Carol
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You are welcome Begin Again
Gert