Chocolate Lovers
One line poem for the contest19 total reviews
Comment from Terry Overton
A very profound statement. First I have to say I like chocolate that is sweet and also bitter. To use this as how we enjoy or experience love was an excellent idea. Nice job!
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A very profound statement. First I have to say I like chocolate that is sweet and also bitter. To use this as how we enjoy or experience love was an excellent idea. Nice job!
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you're welcome
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
Wow, what kind of drink has chocolate on top? I was thinking hot fudge but I don't see any ice cream. Chocolate, a cherrie and then there is perhaps a shot of jello?
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Wow, what kind of drink has chocolate on top? I was thinking hot fudge but I don't see any ice cream. Chocolate, a cherrie and then there is perhaps a shot of jello?
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it. The artwork is amazing - not sure what it's made of, but it sure looks tempting!
Comment from Mark D. R.
June, this really a drippy one-liner LOL.
Like the words and artwork comb a lot. Often life is just like that: sweet and bitter! We can take both and enjoy the taste.
Mark
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June, this really a drippy one-liner LOL.
Like the words and artwork comb a lot. Often life is just like that: sweet and bitter! We can take both and enjoy the taste.
Mark
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an excellent contest entry, June. Your words are precise and apply to both chocolate and lovers. I believe I just read the winner. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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This is an excellent contest entry, June. Your words are precise and apply to both chocolate and lovers. I believe I just read the winner. Best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan
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Comment from Dr. Nad
This is an excellent entry for the One Line Poem contest. You very succinctly compare and contrast the bitterness and the sweetness of chocolate and couples in love. With solemnity you subtly pronounce to the world that lovers savor the bitter - as well as the sweet. I detect a hint of an admonishment. I inferred in some way you are informing us that as in the old song; "You can't have one without the other."
And Then? . . . Maybe . . . NOT!
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This is an excellent entry for the One Line Poem contest. You very succinctly compare and contrast the bitterness and the sweetness of chocolate and couples in love. With solemnity you subtly pronounce to the world that lovers savor the bitter - as well as the sweet. I detect a hint of an admonishment. I inferred in some way you are informing us that as in the old song; "You can't have one without the other."
And Then? . . . Maybe . . . NOT!
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You are most Welcome.
Comment from R56Ma3
You said it all in just one line, a complete description of romance written in a clever way. Thank you for sharing a wonderful piece and best wishes to you. R56ma3 Susan C.
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You said it all in just one line, a complete description of romance written in a clever way. Thank you for sharing a wonderful piece and best wishes to you. R56ma3 Susan C.
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it.
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You're quite welcome
Comment from tfawcus
Cleverly done! An apt simile connecting two great passions! There is a freshness and originality in your presentation of this idea that may well put it in the winners' circle.
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Cleverly done! An apt simile connecting two great passions! There is a freshness and originality in your presentation of this idea that may well put it in the winners' circle.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it. Always appreciate your feedback.
Comment from zanya
Yes - so few words and yet so much profound truth expressed - could be a recipe for life's journey as we soldier on through good and bad times - lovely pic- has to be be in the winner's enclosure !
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Yes - so few words and yet so much profound truth expressed - could be a recipe for life's journey as we soldier on through good and bad times - lovely pic- has to be be in the winner's enclosure !
Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
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Thank you for stopping by to read and share your sentiments on this piece. Glad you enjoyed it. We do need to soildier through life, accepting the bitter and embracing the sweet.
Comment from LJbutterfly
There have never been truer words spoken (written). I have read your poem in sheer delight as I munch on a chocolate protein bar. Your artwork looks delicious, and the words of your poem sound tasty. Best wishes in the contest.
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There have never been truer words spoken (written). I have read your poem in sheer delight as I munch on a chocolate protein bar. Your artwork looks delicious, and the words of your poem sound tasty. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 12-Aug-2021
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